Guest Speaker (Sir Franklyn John):
Erm goodmorning, 80SHOTS we gotta do something man, nodody's keeping it real anymore, but hey i guess we can be fake. look at artist like rule an ll cool j they makeing money and there rapping for hoes. so what should we do,

80SHOTS: listen dogg you need to chill, tell me what you think about this...

where i come from, it aint nothing but murderous looks/
joints hoes niggaz mexicans that rap wit the illset hookz/
you get shot-you dont even feel it, use to the pain/
every days a rainy day, got nothing to loose an nufin 2gain/
the sky's blue, but you are to, from the constant pain of cold/
so many years as a mute, your unspoken words seem old/
every nigga wanna be a soldier,da rap game seems so tasteless/
could of got rated a thousand times, but life seems so senseless/
guns drugs fast cars bling that what every nigga needs?/
pdiddy and master-p must be rich,but damm where there talent g/
50 i rate you, but nigga you need to elevate/
in da club was aaaight, stunt 101 nigga that shit was fake/
i'm into locks, mobb deep mos def dem niggaz r real/
wordplay like drama, them niggaz skits appeal/
cant survive without my family need my mumma love constantly/
only got a picture to remember her by, aint got love for nobody/-


Guest Speaker (Sir Franklyn John): now 80 hold on right there, aint you gonna include any disses on anybody, common we gotta pump it up.

80SHOTS: well i'm aaaight wit everybody in this motha fucka.
but yo check it:

beef comes to me i handle shit like i'm gangster/
put pen to paper, an torture ya with literature/
your quick to run yo mouth, i'm quick to take u out/
no 1 like that cent u wear-its smells like bad trout/
smash a pane of glass-slit yo wrsit then use my fist/
samuri yo ass (Guest Speaker: 80 your taking the piss)
yo Guest i need no help, my lyrics pop your vane/
major artery's failing, while the blood rushed to yo brain/
no need for torture-the only thing that can stop me is god, homie/
see the fears in yo eyes, i know u scared homie/
fuck these commercial niggaz fuck nelly an fuck chingy/
yaahl niggaz know shit about tha game, but still getting money/
could battle both of ya an dismantel ya-put u in jamaica/
too much pressure-u2 fake rappaz ship yo ass back to albania/
flows so weak, i battle ya while playing hide an seek/
nigga it not worth it, beefin wit me-u end up dead in tha street/




Excuse me 2way, i would love to battle you again, but dont front nigger me and u aint friends. see some stuff u said in are battle u took it too far!..

Bitch u got brave hearted coz we were battle-in/
said a few things about me-that i know u regretting/
you fucking trick, i cant even diss you coz it aint worth it/
if you dont like me you pussy, u can suck my dick

trick! ha ha, just some lil freestyles this nigga fort of, piece out, an fuck 2way, fuck tha whole of disturbing-the-piece, fuck them niggaz!
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ha ha

Yo, this shit was alrite, in a sense i guess. But c'mon man, your throwing dissus at big time rappers, who ain't neva gunna read this shit? Keep elevating man, n keep it REAL.. Peace..

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

yo flow was good, wordplay ok, lol u dissing chingy-dat nigger buff! 4real do this was ok, just keep elevating,








maybe u should read my signature, i know u understand it-

and 4 those who dont its in spanish coz ima spanish gal, piece

This Was Decent Keep Elevatin & Droppin....

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..word up...decent piece..much better than your first post...good shceme..lacked on the vocab a little..but..alright..

thanks 4yaahl feedback, fuck hate ima elevate! piece, uppin