10 lines min
no dick riding
No hate votes
No crews
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Spit first

I did............................on the other thing u set up......look at it.....................................

HTis is hes verse

This boy tryna act tuff.....but he got teddy bears in his room//
Go home little gurl....cus you be facin the doom//
It too easy to sweep you...so easy i can use a broom//
You so borin....when the voters hear u they start snoring//
You dont belong here.....you know you gonna lose//
Everyone gonna vote for me....its too easy to choose//
No one listenin to u..cuz dey grabbed a pillow and took a snooze//
He actin like a PYROMANIAC....every1 is runnin like 911 ATTACK//
Im gonna preclude you from dis battle.....//
Its easy to defeat u....ride up next to u and push u off da saddle//
Im a CHAMP in dis shit.....And i jus defeated this TRAMP//
DONE......u go SON

Yea das my verse............................................. ..............................iight u go.......cuz its ur turn.........

Unknown Skills? nah! Your skills are non-existant , like the dinosaurs
I am lyricly evolved - walkng on two legs, you still stuck on all fours
Your scared of my verse ,shaking like you just saw a ghost
FOr fucks Sake! I am battling a kid who asks " How do i post?"
Hes crews name is solo! But thats just reflects his sex life
this kid couldnt get laid, if Pamela Anderson was his wife
He should get paid- fuck it! here is an award,
Congradulations! your the wackest Emcee on this board
Ignore the top ill finish you with the last line
If being wack was illegal, you would be doing time

IIght good spit...........VOTE PEOPLE>>>>>>>>>>Unknown Skillz............................................ up..........up

uppin 1................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

Goddamnit No one votin.....................................uppin... .....................................

upin.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

Ehhh, the 2nd verse won this, I would presume it was Eki but I don't know what HT is, so I'll vote when I'm clarified. 1st one was dry as fuck, the rhyme scheme was just 2 new for me, I'm not up to that, but the 2nd verse had a better scheme and WAY better punches.

TELL ME WHO THE SECOND VERSE IS SO I CAN VOTE FOR THEM.

CLICK MY LINK AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK.

Yeh! the first verse is hes i just made a typo. is suppost to say THIS not HTis..... but yeh second verse is mine.............................................. .................................................. ..uppin

Im gonna have to go with tha second verse on this... i think its eki's...

... he just had hard hitting punches...Unknowns were played and wack as fuck....flow'd about tha same...
and... wordplay was about even...
tha punches took this battle..

so

v/eki

hit this up with an honest vote.....thanks
Vs. CarsonJetX2

punches eki
opener eki closer eki
eki took it on all levels............................................ .

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Unknown
This boy tryna act tuff.....but he got teddy bears in his room//
Go home little gurl....cus you be facin the doom//
wack...
It too easy to sweep you...so easy i can use a broom//
You so borin....when the voters hear u they start snoring//
don't rhyme and wack...
You dont belong here.....you know you gonna lose//
Everyone gonna vote for me....its too easy to choose//
naw
No one listenin to u..cuz dey grabbed a pillow and took a snooze//
He actin like a PYROMANIAC....every1 is runnin like 911 ATTACK//
BOOOO!
Im gonna preclude you from dis battle.....//
Its easy to defeat u....ride up next to u and push u off da saddle//
Im a CHAMP in dis shit.....And i jus defeated this TRAMP//
no no no....

Not a pretty read... work on all departments kid - Ya lines were wack... no denying it but ya will elevate dun.

Eki
Unknown Skills? nah! Your skills are non-existant , like the dinosaurs
I am lyricly evolved - walkng on two legs, you still stuck on all fours
aight
Your scared of my verse ,shaking like you just saw a ghost
FOr fucks Sake! I am battling a kid who asks " How do i post?"
1st line - blah, 2nd was aight....
Hes crews name is solo! But thats just reflects his sex life
this kid couldnt get laid, if Pamela Anderson was his wife
naw
He should get paid- fuck it! here is an award,
Congradulations! your the wackest Emcee on this board
...played
Ignore the top ill finish you with the last line
If being wack was illegal, you would be doing time
played

OK verse... more then enough to kill Unknown

V-Eki

Honest votes on theses please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1076109
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300
I'll poll my vote soon

PiZ