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01-15-04, 07:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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Repedative Occurances
IP: A26E 4629
I'm gonna just key this now.....just made up the title......so i'm gonna go with it DONT SLEEP..leave a link and i'll hit ur's up....thanX!
What is it about life that keeps everyone going? When asked, lateley the wrong things are showing See each of our lives are more precious than light Still we have to let out the agression and fight Bottlin' up your emotions only hurts you more So exhile them out and lay someone's head on a floor Dont take a soul though ... that's the cardinal sin But some cant stop ... say it's "to hard to defend" When look at the world continuously turning and turning It's the repedative occurances yearning for learning See theres certain events and actions that take place, That can be stopped, for us it's possible to change fate Why eat off a deranged plate?, you could save grace Instead with your grave face you choose to pledge waste This is not in my room ... iv'e been around the edge paced With red face, frustrated, that I live inside my own head case Cause, People are shot, people are killed How do we stop ... whats already still? How do we drop ... whats already spillt? How do we Hot! ... whats already ILLed? Hopin' the pot ... be givin' you skill? You smokin' a lot ... not livin' in will ... So I hope this is Givin' you chills How can I not try to be real? When, People are shot, people are killed I don't really know what to expect each every morning One day it could be you dead and family in heavy mourning Thta what you dont realize when you smokin that blunt Or when you aint got a condom but you still fuckin that cunt You wanna catch Aids? you better protect yuorself 4 real As well as bullet shaves them shits'll hit you like steel Your body can only take so much punishment, no joke For those who dont acknowledge that ...well... they croak The exsistence we know is some serious shit ...... I still smoke, drink and get delerious kid But dont do it every day ... or you'll learn like I smoked I been sick for 2 months and wanna BURN my own throat So earn your own coat .... and make the paint thick Churn your own quote ..... and make the sain sick You got one chance at life so make sure it counts Don't blow it tryna make $$ on that half an ounce Theres higher things you should be concerned with Like abortion clinic's lettin women Return Kids Cause, People are shot, people are killed How do we stop ... whats already still? How do we drop ... whats already spillt? How do we Hot! ... whats already ILLed? Hopin' the pot ... be givin' you skill? You smokin' a lot ... not livin' in will ... So I hope this is Givin' you chills How can I not try to be real? When, People are shot, people are killed keeeeeeeeezzzzzyyyyyyyy for sheeeeeezzzzzzzzyyyyyy
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01-15-04, 07:33 PM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Dope Shit dawg.......I really Got into it...............Tight Vocab...Wordplay and Flow.....Great piece overall
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01-16-04, 12:10 AM | #3 | ||||||
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Yo Man I Like reading Ya Stuff and shit..i enjoyed this Like most of the Others Ya have got nice Structure and Real Nice FLow And I think Ya have good skill in open mics..you normally have good well worked topics......so all and all Thi was a Decent Read Keep it droping Man....PeacE....
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01-16-04, 12:20 AM | #4 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: C448 F41C
thanx.
uppn
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01-16-04, 02:36 AM | #5 | |||||||
That's The Bad Guy
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IP: EC0B 84C7
no doubt a good piece.... there was the middle wich had me going...all the multies were a good usage.....good drop...
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01-17-04, 06:28 PM | #6 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: B91E 5FCC
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01-19-04, 01:53 PM | #7 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 3D67 C959
stop sleepin..........uppn........this
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01-19-04, 02:48 PM | #8 | ||||||
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
i liked this piece a lot...it's good to see that you can write some nice shit aside from battling...definitely feelin it..good job tech...i like the way you approached your topic, written very nicely
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01-19-04, 07:00 PM | #9 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 3D67 C959
upppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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01-19-04, 07:34 PM | #10 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 1973 EC9D
hot open mic' props....very nice keep it up *1*
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01-19-04, 07:40 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: F76C 0002
i liked this piece a lot...it's good to see that you can write some nice shit aside from battling...definitely feelin it..good job tech...i like the way you approached your topic, written very nicely
yup that was a nice piece man keep droppin |
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