Get ready for a beat, koz its time u face da ultimate elite,
So get your little candy ass ready for a sticky white treat,
Now you facin me and u feelin da trepidition,
surrender now kid or escalate the situation,
unlike you assclown......24/7 masturbation isnt my notion,
i've got real bitchis & u stil dealin with puberty stagnation?
Your Rhymes are makin rap look like crap,
dont even try me, u'r a mouse inside da trap,
Why you tryn to hide that you had a pre-mature birth,
even dat wasa mistake, u wer'nt even meant for da earth,
My word Siege has already made you extentuated,
Lemme finsh dis off by u gettin expurgated.


I had another one, but I think i lost it somewhere :/, I'll find it and post, any suggestions or advice?? Do you guys think I'm ready for Front Lines yet?

Thanks for Reading,

Have a good day and a very good night

Post this in Open Mic. You'll get comments there.

This was ok.....structure could be fixed up a bit though i think, just try to keep the lines around the same length....probably should try to work on better content...also try working on some multies....you had some alright vocab....but keep at it.