This whole damn song is about "friends". There's no chorus for it yet but when it's finished i'll edit it in.

[Verse 1]
Friends...
Nobody knows the meaning of the word
How it came about, is here or occured
It's an alias for backstabbing people
Those who are liars, punks who deceit you
Claiming to have your back until you turn around
And realise they're gone, nowhere to be found
Forced to share the planet wit' these pricks
They all should be put to rest under six
Can see betrayal when you look in their eyes
'Cause they're really your enemies in disguise
Just wanna grab 'em by the throat and squeeze
Til their dead weight and weak at the knees
I've thrown "trust" out the window long ago
Why give it to someone who's really your foe?
I hate them, why did God create them?
I wanna knock them to the ground and stomp them
Frustration inside me has reached it's limit
These pussies, I swear are gonna get it

[Verse 2]
This is what I turned into and have come to feel
Some say I have no feelings and a heart of steel
You would too if you observe what I do
Or know the type of shit that i've gone through
Won't settle until they get what they deserve
Waiting on the day for justice to be served
I wasn't born angry, I just growed to be
After living in such a corrupted society
No matter where you go they're omnipresent
How many on earth? One-hundred percent
Leeches that wanna suck you for everything your worth
That's how it's been since the homo sapien birth
I'm like a ticking time bomb waiting to explode
I feel like i'm just gonna some day up and erode
Aint got no sympathy for bitches like these
There's no getting rid of like an uncureable disease
My loins quiver as the thought crosses my mind
That me and these low lifes are of the same kind

[Verse 3]
Maybe you don't understand where i'm coming from
How I got here, when and how come
It's 'cause of an asshole who left me high and dry
Just took off one day with no explanation why
And I aint gonna lie, it did hurt for awhile
I was uncontrollably depressed and hostile
Swore to myself I would never let it happen again
I wouldn't be played by another "friend"
I stand by my word, keeping that promise
That's how it's gonna be til I no longer exist
Who need s them? Just to destroy your life
Waiting on the chance to cut your throat with a knife
Not this time, you come around me you're dead
This aint no joke, you heard what I said
You don't deserve this much attention
That's why your name was never mentioned
This song is for you, so listen to what I say
I hate you! I despise you! More each day

yo man dis is a hot peice 4 sure
da concept was hot i havent seen
it b4 around here, der r alot of shade
niggaz in da world, stay up
peace
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107855

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Thanks.

Uppin!

thought this was a pretty decent peice.... in places the ryhming could have been carried further, to help the flow... and in some places the scheme seemed pretty basic, but it stayed on topic, and a good length....

Thanks for your oppinion.

..I liked this...it was a little sloppy on some places..but..no one is 'perfect'(maybe me??...LOl~)..anyway..I thought your content was good and it flowed well..that's all folks~~~~

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