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Tek 0 0%
CarsonJetX2 5 100.00%
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Old 01-18-04, 11:17 AM   #1
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CarsonJet -v- Tek

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Old 01-18-04, 11:20 AM   #2
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check in.. lets make this memorable.. c ya in an hour.
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Old 01-18-04, 11:21 AM   #3
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Old 01-18-04, 11:49 AM   #4
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Tek.....

I'm sorry ta burst ya bubble son' unless a merk in memorable
1 hour past...naw I do it in 30 an still displace his mandible
This joke actaully think's he's gonna put Jet in place?....
Look^^at this Herb...He can't even fill his avi's space..
He's just a middle-weight...In a mind-set of sub-par text-c..
Please, the fact that he's sub'par..is product of scar'd up knees
He's still a lyrical soldier...Anyone good there left 2 months ago
Then again, Tek does blow...can't rep nuttin else so he post's up deathr-row^^
Ya'll kno....It's a losing cause...Tek..ur equivalent to heel's..
How does it feel...I even sat down wit ur record...Ur own L's struck a deal...
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Old 01-18-04, 11:57 AM   #5
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Another Net Whore passed from Crew to Crew like Lost Property
This bitch only Drops Hott when i Knock Dead his Burnt Body..
I'll cut u up and Burn ya parts to leave ya Ashes Scattered
left Bruised and Battered cos this Fool never Mattered..
My thoughts Gathered to Conclude this chump aint much
when it comes to the Crunch he'll get Slumped in Trash Dumps..
Tek been ill since ya started... rippin me?! how could you think that?
fuck ya Small Time Lyrics, its Synthetic Material... more like Shrink Rap...
Teks determined to take u Closer to God.. so u can Demonstrate Faith
i got a Herb On My Hands.. but the Weight he Holds.. is Under an Eighth..
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Old 01-18-04, 12:00 PM   #6
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Old 01-18-04, 12:05 PM   #7
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Punches: Carson
Wordplay: Neither
Personals: Carson
Multis: Tek

Vote - Carson

One reason I thought Tek lost was because most of his verse was filler, and his only punch was his very last line. Carson had personals throughout his verse.

Look^^at this Herb...He can't even fill his avi's space
Best line of the battle.
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Old 01-18-04, 12:08 PM   #8
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Old 01-18-04, 12:17 PM   #9
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opener: carson (hit harder)
closer: tie (about same)
punches: carson (tek only had a few aiight ones, whilst carson hit hard, an consistant)
personals: carson (killed it with the avi's space line)
structure: Tie
overall: carson (better overall verse)
 
Old 01-18-04, 12:48 PM   #10
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hmmm tek didn't come as hard on this one but hey man its whatever much love for you both...not that carson needs this ego boost....anyway i think carson took this one just because i was feeling his punches on this they came a bit more hardcore...defianlty tech for mulits....and well flow i liked the way his flowed better...put carson put big numbers on the board with punches and the personals are what really killed you....truest line in the battle....

Another Net Whore passed from Crew to Crew like Lost Property
^werd damn carson how many crews you been in now.....4?...5?....no hate peace..
 
Old 01-18-04, 01:47 PM   #11
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^^^4 or 5.....lol.....more like 20 to 30......very true..
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Old 01-18-04, 04:27 PM   #12
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Old 01-18-04, 06:24 PM   #13
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Old 01-18-04, 08:47 PM   #14
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Opener-Carson
Closer-Both
Personals-Carson
Punches-Carson
Flow-Both
Meta-Both
Multi-Tek

Overal-Carson

Tek=Fillers, just don't get those fillers in their man, other then that your verse was good. Carson just kept coming consistant with those awsome punches and that's why he got this.....
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Old 01-18-04, 09:33 PM   #15
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I liked teks opener and closer...
Carsons closer was nice too...
Nice structure and flow by both...
Carson came more consistant though...
He stayed pretty much at the same level throughout his verse...
Tek seemed like his middle 6 lines were filler...
I still dont think carsons verse was much iller, but he barely edged this one...

v/carson

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