yo!wassup all you shit-heels and dumb fags!im about to bust some shit for yall-literally!

money money money motherfuckin bling bling
fuck a bitch up the ass till she drops a o-ring
when it cums to ass luv i'm the motherfucking king
and all you sucker crackers can blow my ding-a-ling
now alot of girls dont like to think
they would ever be down to eat the stink
but you hos dont know the tricks like me
i'll feed you poo with the twenty-three
i'll be up in your ass untill i pull the fuck out
then ill spin you around and pop my dick in ya mouth
i'll make my bitch suck me untill i cum
she said she won't eat shit,well she just ate some.

botolicious-my cock's delicious-so all you bitches-suck my dick

botolicious-my dick is wicked-nutricious boner-suck my dick

i'm money money bling bling and i'm fully erect
here to put you limp rappers in motherfucking check
i got me a prescription to get some viagra
i spray more fluid than be fallin in niagra
i'll bend you over,slut,and rectally stab ya
cuz i got more sperm than pablo picasso
i'll fuck you in your asshole ,and give you hot greek
fuck a bitch up the butt untill her shit hole leaks
stupid ass sluts are after my dick
cuz its always stiff and it gets them off quick
once i met a bitch with sicc dick desire
i pissed on her pussy to extinguish the fire
she wanted more cock and i obliged
i fisted that whore till the twat ran dry
so if you fucking suckers wanna know about hardcore
just ask your bitch what she did with me before.

peace to my stromie m.c. bartok!he aint got no aids!i eat motherfucking civet cats,you stupid fucking bitch!!

Are you trying to tell us something with that?...lol

But this was ok....structure was decent in this......you had some alright vocab in there, probably could be up'd a bit though i think....try adding some more multies to this though to make it better....but keep at it.

WOW..amazing..I only read the first few lines..and it blew me away..this shit was just...plain...simple...GARBAGE!!!!!!!!!

LMFAO^^ i didnt think much of it.... very simplistic... ya need to elevate...

wait till you weak ass morons get a load of my real shit!fuck you wigger fruits.shove a mouse up your cracker asses.

this shit was wack overall...
it was plain maybe nice flow
but very...very..very.. weak vocab..
even ma lil' brother could write that shit...

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structure was ok but most of it sounded gay
like this
"i'll be up in your ass untill i pull the fuck out
then ill spin you around and pop my dick in ya mouth"