HOue rules....14 lines max. 20 min spit after both meet...blind spit to man

Checkiiiiiiiiiiiiin in..................... waiting on other dude...gl to both....ill drop once hes in

Im In Chek////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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now im the rapper and your the manager/
im bout 2 sweep this poll so call me a janitor/
man i remember once when i was a noob/
my days is over now its your time to loose!/
and you think you betta than me?/
do me a favor....tell ur self its just a dream/
and when i spit punches they real hard hitters/
you dont spit deadly shit, so why yo name venoms?/
and we can go further in this like shootin guns and shit/
cus fighting is A WASTE OF TIME I WONT EVEN BALL MY FIST/
and im bout 2 end this so take my notes/
while all the voters put my punches in quotes.
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he aint kept to his own deadline!!!
therefore reaLL should take the win!!

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...Check this man...if i have to battle a joke...then come on dawg...
lets just get real...
...he cant fucking write right now....his head is about to explode... relax..you'll sumbit something ill...
...ill...what the fuck am i talking about...shit just about everything i can use against this bitch....
....fuck this shit...im going to post 6 lines and still k.o this mother fucker...and thats just the end of it...
....but hell nah...i seen your whack skills...you aint got nothing against me...so i spit weak shit on your ass....
....hell if i lose...then i might as well rematch...cuz im going to hit you up like the last time i did in this threads past...
...you dont know me son...scared to face the facts...so u just copy and submit some bitten rhymes...
....lol...speaking of bitten lines...this bitch probably doing it right now..and hell it probably is mine...
...ok this bitch is close to getting merked....thats what im trying to say...
do i dare to compare...
...this cat is nothing compared to me....only shit hes compared to is my
fucking nostril hairs...
...10 lines down...still going and going like a bunny on the energizer
commercial...banging drums is dope...
...yeah...drums are dope...lol but sad this bitch aint drumline...come on
nick cannons a joke...
...speaking of nick cannon...shit thats even worse than B2k...hell there all gay....just like you...
...i speak the truth...its all coo...check the link..ClickHere..it even says your a fucking generic jew foo...

Fixed. -Token

had trouble fixing my sentences so it can be 14 lines...and had to get the link fixed....so it wont fuck up the structure..pz out uppin for votes....man i should have went easier...darn..wasted some verses

aiight, theprophett did take this one, pretty easily reall came pretty simple!!! an he han no real punches, wordplay, or n e thin else only good thin he had was structure!!

theprophett, took the harder punches, wordplay an he had a better verse!!


peace

plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109399

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ummm ok either im high (again) or venoms rhymes were tottally fucked hands down reall won this to bad i cant vote

i'm not sure what this guy's on about ^. oh well. reall took it in my opinion. venoms stuff didn't really rhyme to well and lacked any major punchlines or wordplay. reall had some of both, and his stuff flowed. he gets my vote easy.

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what the hell.....prophett didnt even battle homey........reall took this shit hands down.........i mean better punches....all venom did was curse reall out..........come on now....1

LOL fucker voted for himself...ur banned bitch bye!!! good by out of crew to punk lol damn herbs

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