this is a battle i did with KG for the G'est tourny but i dont got his post right now. heres my verse.

check it
This NOBLE here SPITTIN-MY-FREESTYLE with PLAYED-OUT-WRITTENS/
Im known GLOBAL HITTIN-UP-TWINS-G-STYLE I soon be KILLIN/
I'll win this G NOBEL-PRIZE, I shoot BULLETS-WHILE-RAPPIN/
I drive by in MOBILE, my GUN-COCKED, finger on trigga I-PULL-IT-AND-
START-CAPPIN/
I put slugz in KG and he go NUMB, pale like JACKSON/
I got AK-47s and 9s, LOCKED-GUNS, things get DRASTIC/
Set up funerals and CASKETS, wrap up KGs body in PLASTIC/
I put his remains in a BASKET, damn too bad KG got BLASTED/
It's like KG wasn't G enough so he never LASTED/
I got real guns, while KG got bands around his fingers he call
ELASTICS/
I beat KG wit TACTICS, Im a HOMOCIDE-ARTIST/
KGs on the HOMO-SIDE, as he SPITS-WITH-WEAK-SHIT/
He soon be MUMMYFIED, wrap him in bandages and put HIM-IN-CASKETS/
You need a BULLET-PROOF-VEST, also a MASK-AND.../(GUnit-My Buddy)
You know Im one of THE-BEST, I-STAY-G, STAY-ON-TASK-AND.../
I send LEAD-TO-YA-CHEST, I-KILL-MCS, I-STAY-ON-TOPIC/
I send LEAD-TO-YA-HEAD, I-KILL-EM-EASILY, KILL-YOU-WIT-ONE-HAND/
I aint no expert at RAP, but I gain DEFEATS, as YALL-GET-RAN-DOWN/
BOW-DOWN, to tha lyrical god, give me MY-G-CROWN/
I got SHOTGUNS-AND-RIFLES, I keep pumpin and LOADIN-SHELLS/
I kill MCs FO-FUN-AND-SEND-FISTFULLS, I send yall NIGGAZ-TO-HELL/
My SHIT-SELL, I SPIT-REAL-WELL, shots will RING-YA-BELLS/
I SEND-CHILLS, as I laugh and GET-A-THRILL, while I RISE-WIT-KILLS/
Rhymes sicker than PURPLE-PILLS, you know Im a G and I KEEP-IT-REAL/
I GOT-SKILLZ, eat niggaz like a MEAL, see my VERSE? I'm KEEPIN-IT-
GANGSTA/(Fabolous)
I shoot in FIELDS, FORWARD-AND-REVERSE, I'm KILLIN-THE-WANKSTAS/
Aight thats good enough fo a VERSE, good luck, and THANK YA/

NobLe aka J.Dub

who the fuck is KG and who the fuck are you and..this was okay..you did have some decent punches..but take out the CAPS..peace..

lol thx. i need some mo feedback

start replying to other people..before you up your shit....

penskillz, the new biggest freeposter...lmao... thought this had a good flow going, but battles need mainly good strong punches.... some were decent but there was alot of filling in there.... all in all not bad... jus could have come at it a bit harder........

aight thx. and i do but it was a key so i didnt try hard.