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Old 01-27-04, 05:04 PM   #1
Twiztid_chick69
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Alright..This seems like just some normal ole shit poem lol..But read the first letter of each sentence straight down after you read the poem..Its kinda kool...Feedback please..

From the first time that I saw you
Understand that I knew, you weren't true
Calling your little hoes from our home
Keeping me worried, leaving me alone

You made me feel guilty when I wasn't around
One time, I thought you were down
Undeniable, you slept with every tramp in town

Always telling lies to my face
Saying no one could take my place
Some day that will all come back to you
How you said for me, the extremes you go through
Or how you said you loved me
Leaving me, yet saying im your only
Everyone knows your a phony

~It's a bit choppy..but tell me what yah think~
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