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due tomrrow midnite

getin asap

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in tha streets if there is any miscommunication/
u will have body parts missin that ain't even worth replacin/
it will only be a blessin/
that i don't take tha AK and knock ya fuckin chest in/
have ya body lookin like a tossed salad ya blood is tha dressing/
when i done wit u whats not gone a zip lock bag can fit the rest in/
all i do is lock and load/
leave ya body lookin like a skid mark in tha road/
knock one of ya legs off 2 make u take one step at time/
hit ya dome wit feces filled tips so when u died they can say u had shit on ya mind/

holla

mike mills sounded to rehearsed, no personal stuff

*Easy Win*Expected*Better*

...Mike Is New To RB, Another Whack Newbie...
...Kids So Elementary Sayin "You Got Cooties!"...
...Punches Arent Reaching, Now You Tryin Collect...
...If They Were On A String, THey Still Wouldnt Connect...
...This Cat Has Nine Lives, All Gone In About 2 Minutes...
...Cuz My Verse Eatin You Like Dogs With Kibbles ANd BIts...
...Mike You Should Have Ducked, Ran, Or Even Quacked...
...You Suck Thats A Fact, You Just Got Bitch Smacked!...
...Mike_Millz Lacks Talent, My Lyrics Leavin Him Silent...
...Cuz Unlike Your Punches, Mine Are Strictly Violent!...

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Fatal takes this easy, had a nice flow which is always nice, makes it easier to follow. Some nice punches and metas. Not really any personals from either tho. Mike had some newbish lines, nuthin great...orgood.
PLease take the time to drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

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mm's punches wernt hitting and he was only taking about killing and crap like that try and use some personals
fatal marriage ur verse was better but it was still abit basic
vote-fatal

heres my battle link checkit
vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

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both verses were fairly basic but fatal had better punches and he had a pretty good structure and flow....his shit was a little more directive and creative the MM's so that's why he gets my vote.........

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both verses were fairly basic but fatal had better punches and he had a pretty good structure and flow...hit more direct with punches better personals blahb lahb lah

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^lol at the guy that copy+pasted Diverse

Anyways, yea, Fatal takes this easily. Whoever said it first is correct, mike, you sound way too rehearsed. Kinda like you were writin a song or sumthin, and just placed it here. Your verse was direct and your punches weren't very good. Fatal had a good structure, and some good punches which results for him in taking this battle.

Noticable lines...
"...Mike Is New To RB, Another Whack Newbie...
...Kids So Elementary Sayin "You Got Cooties!"..."

/v - Fatal

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