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True-Souldja 0 0%
Harlem's Finest 5 100.00%
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Old 01-28-04, 10:33 AM   #1
Harlem's Finest
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True-Souldja vs Harlem's Finest

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10 lines.. 30 mins from now..
Blind spits..
Good luck..
 
Old 01-28-04, 10:37 AM   #2
True-Souldja
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Checkin in........................................
 
Old 01-28-04, 10:58 AM   #3
True-Souldja
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Lookin at ya 'fake' gun I wonder what harlem becomes,
I heard that city was full of fucking garbage n bums,
Ill rip this kid easier then that big bum who ripped yo ass,
You might be studderin, or you tryin ta spit too fast,
You gettin slobbery, like you as nervous atta robbery,
Ya verse sucks like the pussy your mom offered me,
Just goes to show what you actually the Finest of,
City wit shitty drugs and whores tryna minus love,
Try ta beat me and get it repelled like you n chicks,
If you get a win here its proof you screwin dicks,
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:07 AM   #4
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This herbs a cheap drug user... hes addicted to bad lines
Still tryna kick the habit and downgrade to dope rhymes
Profile shows your main interests include fourplay.. its just sad
Fronting sexual imagery, when you've simply bought a multi pad
I'll merk you with ease son.. throw some raw jabs at ya throat
Although I'll just get praise back... 'cos ya voice finally broke
I'd say you were plain adopted but to be honest it lacks humour..
Ya mom left you.. I'm battlin the worlds most intelligent tumour
You're a drug dealer.. but it really don't matter bout ya sales
'Cos here kiddo... theres no way you could ever tip the scales
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:10 AM   #5
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Harlem takes this, more creative and elevated verse. True came with that played sex/gay crap. Nothin was really original or caught my interest. Harlem had a few played lines as well, but some of his shit was good.
This herbs a cheap drug user... hes addicted to bad lines
Still tryna kick the habit and downgrade to dope rhymes
Pretty good opener there.

PLease drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:11 AM   #6
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Nice verse bro, good luck.

Uppin #1............
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:13 AM   #7
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lyric did you read my whole verse??? lol one line has to do wit gay and it was the set up line. read the whole verse.
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:20 AM   #8
Virtuoso
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harlems finest takes it.........

better punches.... flow an harder hitting lines.......
.........Soulja your verse was too simple man......... gabage an bums.....humor an tumor comon man get more dept then that.....

cote harlems finest......

i took the time to vote return the honest favor on my battle.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...99&page=1&pp=15

^^ my battle link

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Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....
TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:26 AM   #9
bonespitter
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Lookin at ya 'fake' gun I wonder what harlem becomes,
I heard that city was full of fucking garbage n bums,
GOOD BAR NEEDS A BIT MORE FLOW
Ill rip this kid easier then that big bum who ripped yo ass,
You might be studderin, or you tryin ta spit too fast,
I LIKED THE FIRST LINE 2ND IS PLAYED
You gettin slobbery, like you as nervous atta robbery,
Ya verse sucks like the pussy your mom offered me,
GOOD BAR
Just goes to show what you actually the Finest of,
City wit shitty drugs and whores tryna minus love,
MY FAVORITE LINES OF YO BATTLE
Try ta beat me and get it repelled like you n chicks,
If you get a win here its proof you screwin dicks
GREAT CLOSER
GOOD BATTLE SOLDJA

This herbs a cheap drug user... hes addicted to bad lines
Still tryna kick the habit and downgrade to dope rhymes
GREAT OPPENER FLIPIN HIS WORDS
Profile shows your main interests include fourplay.. its just sad
Fronting sexual imagery, when you've simply bought a multi pad
GOOD PERSONAL
I'll merk you with ease son.. throw some raw jabs at ya throat
Although I'll just get praise back... 'cos ya voice finally broke
GOOD BUT PLAYED
I'd say you were plain adopted but to be honest it lacks humour..
Ya mom left you.. I'm battlin the worlds most intelligent tumour
YOUR BEST BAR BESIDES CLOSER
You're a drug dealer.. but it really don't matter bout ya sales
'Cos here kiddo... theres no way you could ever tip the scales
BEST BAR YOUR CLOSER IS DOPE MAN
KEEP ON BATTLIN MAN YOUR RIPPIN THIS SHIT
VOTE GOES TO HARLEM

please hit up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110042
 
Old 01-28-04, 12:04 PM   #10
Kid Killa
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This was a good battle, but...

Souldja: Ur verse was good. Ur punches were a little detached, cause u aint really know about Harlem like u was talkin. I liked the verse, tho. Nice metas wordplay personals.

Harlem's Finest: Ur verse was good, too. Ur punches were good, better than his. I liked ur metas and wordplay. I was just feelin' ur verse more.

Vote: Harlem's Finest
 
Old 01-28-04, 12:07 PM   #11
Harlem's Finest
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Uppin for a final vote...... drop a link..........
 
Old 01-28-04, 12:21 PM   #12
Born To Kill
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Bottom line...

Harlem brought a proper battle verse...

Complete with wordplay, personals, and nice hard punches, AND a touch of humor...
(that "tumor" line made me laugh)

Souldja went for personals, but missed being effective with em.

Cuz he mostly went after his city...
Lay off that after one line or two at the most.

Better directed and architected verse.

By Harlem

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