10 lines
30 minutes
U spit first
Good luck

If i quite now i won't be able to break you down shake you 'round, i'm hell bound, shake rattle and roll time to leave your home watch when your when your alone time to break your bones.hell, my woords can't be stopped that's my philosophy so if you battle me don't expect to win on top of me so you think going fist might be worse but i gaurentee you i'll murder you in a hurst, so as i'm down to the last point of time when i drop this rhyme fame has just declined. Think what you will but i can't be dropped try to do whatever you want but i can't be stopped not even popped.
so as i leave you in the dirt remember these words"take the loss man enenthough it hurts"little suckas like me can't die so if you try to murder me in this battle i'll just multiple so don't forget what i said, and when i left the quote you try to find me and i'll be a ghost!

This nigga is a typical newbie, startin' with bullshit.
I wouldn't pay a nickel for the crap this clit spit.
Fucka got less flow than air trapped in a bottle.
No question, I'ma rack up #'s like I won da lotto.
Your structure is fuckin' toppled like da WTC.
Talkin' shit like u gangsta but u can't touch me.
He tries to make excuses as to why his verse's wack.
Nigga it's plain that you hired a ghostwriter on crack.
U can't throw a decent punch, well bitch here's two:
Mods, ban this wack shit and send him back to rhyme school.

Man don't try to say i'm just a typical newbie cause while i'm countin' numbers, you with them other groupies, you tried to battle someone else but man your stuck with me, don't push me to far man, don't fuck with me, if i only got ten lines to say how your lame , don't mess with the untamed, i'm still heavy in this game, if you get thrown off the edge is that alright for you anyone else would else would this rhyme,you like it too! Why don't you stand up with better words come on' be a man.
I think your nervous battlin' me cause you don't understand.
I throw you out the car, leave your ass on the road your stuck sellin'samples, while
all my drugs sold, it getting old, the way you talk to me instead of trien to fight back
you might just ride with me!

Uh... mind tellin' me why u spit again? Read the rules, kid. That's not how it goes down in here. U want a continuous battle, go to Cypher. Take this ^ somewhere else.

Im posting the battle in front lines - good luck to you my friend....- VILLIN

Na man you said 10 lines not 10 lines only 1 verse, you have to say somethinhg next time.
START THE VOTING YA'LL!

MACHAVELLI.......that was straight wack...............ups to kid killa on that...........plus, get original with your name man....- Villin

Man your tellin' me i'm wack why don't we battle if you think you can, and forget about my name it's real and truer than yours so step up.

If i quite now i won't be able to break you down shake you 'round, i'm hell bound, shake rattle and roll time to leave your home watch when your when your alone time to break your bones.hell, my woords can't be stopped that's my philosophy so if you battle me don't expect to win on top of me so you think going fist might be worse but i gaurentee you i'll murder you in a hurst, so as i'm down to the last point of time when i drop this rhyme fame has just declined. Think what you will but i can't be dropped try to do whatever you want but i can't be stopped not even popped.
so as i leave you in the dirt remember these words"take the loss man enenthough it hurts"little suckas like me can't die so if you try to murder me in this battle i'll just multiple so don't forget what i said, and when i left the quote you try to find me and i'll be a ghost!
Your structure is fucked man. Break it down line by line. It was jus a pain in the ass to read. Saw a few punches in ther but nothing great.


This nigga is a typical newbie, startin' with bullshit.
I wouldn't pay a nickel for the crap this clit spit.
played
Fucka got less flow than air trapped in a bottle.
No question, I'ma rack up #'s like I won da lotto.
ehh, kinda whack
Your structure is fuckin' toppled like da WTC.
Talkin' shit like u gangsta but u can't touch me.
blah
He tries to make excuses as to why his verse's wack.
Nigga it's plain that you hired a ghostwriter on crack.
best punch so far. Try and rhyme interesting words
U can't throw a decent punch, well bitch here's two:
Mods, ban this wack shit and send him back to rhyme school.
good

Kid takes this battle. Better structure and flow, and also more and harder hitting pounches.

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

man what you talking about I thought his shit was better then kid killa come on dog

Mach

If i quite now i won't be able to break you down shake you 'round, i'm hell bound, shake rattle and roll time to leave your home watch when your when your alone time to break your bones.hell, my woords can't be stopped that's my philosophy so if you battle me don't expect to win on top of me so you think going fist might be worse but i gaurentee you i'll murder you in a hurst, so as i'm down to the last point of time when i drop this rhyme fame has just declined. Think what you will but i can't be dropped try to do whatever you want but i can't be stopped not even popped.
so as i leave you in the dirt remember these words"take the loss man enenthough it hurts"little suckas like me can't die so if you try to murder me in this battle i'll just multiple so don't forget what i said, and when i left the quote you try to find me and i'll be a ghost!
wow.. couldnt read anything, 1 or 2 punches were visible but with your struct being so bad i couldnt see anymore. break it down line by line and not as a paragraph, it'l be much easier to read[/B}


[B]Kid Killa

This nigga is a typical newbie, startin' with bullshit.
I wouldn't pay a nickel for the crap this clit spit.
not a strong punch at all
Fucka got less flow than air trapped in a bottle.
No question, I'ma rack up #'s like I won da lotto.
ehh whack to the 3rd power...
Your structure is fuckin' toppled like da WTC.
Talkin' shit like u gangsta but u can't touch me.
not really hitting him, just a misfire
He tries to make excuses as to why his verse's wack.
Nigga it's plain that you hired a ghostwriter on crack.
ok i guess...better then the rest
U can't throw a decent punch, well bitch here's two:
Mods, ban this wack shit and send him back to rhyme school.
wow... this was actually decent

Kid Killa takes this battle wit Better structure and the punches that he had were harder then the other kids

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Machavelli, your flow lacks any real structure, also you didnt really have punches, you have to change your style, that will never win battles in here, kid killa i liked a lot of your lines, some solid punches, good closer. vote:Kid Killa

hey drop a vote on this battle please man, this kid talks mad shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243

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