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01-30-04, 08:48 PM | #1 | |||||||
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. . . Can You Feel Me ?. . .
IP: E38C 4580
Seeing Is Believing. . But Through Words You Must Treat These Rhymes Like Brail. . For You Cannot See But You Can Visualize. . You Can Hear. . The Message. . The Most Profound Of It's Time. .
Revolutionary Wordsmith, Words Gift To The Preliminary Now I Stand Atop Hip Hop As A Visionary. . . . . . . With No Blurred Rifts From The Sounds Carried {It's Now Scary} My Speech Is Vivid. . Mosts Reach Is Timid Grab The Mic. . Rip It. . Respect. . Give It I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . . . . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. . I Try To Make Shit As Clear As Possible With No Photography Blink Twice And Ya Eyes Just Might Not Be Able To Adjust N See What I Have Created, You Can Debate It, But That's Expected I Treated The Rap Game Like Car Collisions N Fucking Wrecked It Bar Incisions Tear Skin N Bones From Ligaments You're In A Predicament Where You're Forced To Submit Ya Pen See, You're Wack, Fact Is, I'm All The Positive Adjectives I'll Take Ya Words, Play Um, N Throw Um Back With No Spin DJ, Feel Me ?. . . . Turn My Shit Up Loud And Let It Bump My Sound Is Now. . . . While Most Junk Is Foul N Fucked Follow The Flow, Down The River N Quiver From Instrumentals That I've Laced. . . With My Superior Mental. . . You Try To Repeat N I'll Fuck Ya Dental - N Let The Lyrics Smash Ya Fuckin' Temple *It's Real* [Chorus] So Please. . If You Feelin' This Sound Bombing Through. . Ya Speakers Then Lemme Know So I'll Continue To Bless You. . Shouts To The Supporters, One Finger To The Haters Kid. . If You Feel Me. . Can You Feel Me. . Turn Up This Shit. . It Was Awhile Ago, I'd Style N Pose, Now Just My Prose Is Proposed As The Sickest Flow, I'm Dope Now I'm Suppose Spittin' Lyrics Immuned To Mimics, Retuned My Spirit Now I'm Nearin Clearance To #1 N Kids Don't Wanna Hear It I'm Sorry For Being Sick With Pens, I'll Stick With Friends I Don't Wanna Put Up With This Shit Again, Here's My Ends Fuck That, You Mother Fuckers, I'll Spit Lines Like Knives N Slice Ya Lives In Half, Expectancy Set To Four Days Past - Today, N The Day Is Four Days To What I Told You Last So Hurry Fast N Kiss Your Family Cause They'll Miss Ya Ass That's Not Even At The Height Of My Capabilities, Not Feelin' Me ? Fucka Ginsu After What I Been Through, I Wanna Kill An MC I'll Shatter All Patterns Of Attackin', This Is Iraq Again. . . You Came For My Weapons Of MC Destruction . . Left Empty Handed With Ya Pride Stripped N Mind Concussin' I'm The Next Great Lyricist With Piercin Hits, The Eardrums Bleed Notice My Significance N Take A Glimpse Cause After Fear Comes Me Nuclear Warhead Sited, After One Track I Was Sworn Dead Is It My Fault I Was Born Ahead ?. . . Advanced Intelligence. . . Enhanced Developments, Formula's To. . . . . . . Through Words, Take You Around My Mind With A Magellan-Sense. . . I'm Hip Hop's Essence *It's Real!* [Chorus] It's A New Day. . Writtens Scripted On Looseleaf. . Make Ya Favorite MC's Lose Sleep. . You Know I Aim To Bruise Deep. . N If You Don't Feel Me. . Fuck You. . Ain't Like I Was Askin For Ya Support Anyway. .
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01-31-04, 01:41 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: E38C 4580
Drugs Are Bad Mmkay.
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01-31-04, 12:10 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Seems like i'm not gettin' any feedback in return. .
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01-31-04, 03:05 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
goo dshit..I can see that you are improving(you already nice)..this had some sick flows..good scheme..I don't know why this is getting slept on...
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01-31-04, 03:50 PM | #5 | ||||||||
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. . Dope. . Iunno Why It's Gettin slept On Either. . I've Checked Numerous Pieces. . Oh well.
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01-31-04, 10:56 PM | #6 | |||||||
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One last time. . people who's pieces i've checked, return the favor.
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02-01-04, 12:22 AM | #7 | |||||||
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Good peice...Good flow, wordplay etc...
why is this being slept on? favorite lines... "I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . . . . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. ." Dope As Fuck... Keep Spittin... |
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02-01-04, 01:16 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
I'm feeling the flow, I love this piece dawg, shits how, I like how it sounds out-loud.. It has a nice flow to it. Good text cuz..
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02-01-04, 06:52 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: FEAD FB22
i feel u on this dawg, sum real nice stuff here, keep spittin
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