yo rb u prolly already seen sum o my written shti in open mic, if u havent then wuteva, buit newayz i need help on writin cuz evrytime i write sumtin it always sound betta on audio or it has to go wit audio othawise its a sorry ass flow(yall follow)but yea if ne1 can break it down so i can see wut de difference is n wut im missin.........b much appreciated

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