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I'm new I want someone to tell me how this rhyme is i am a beginner but judge honest
IP: 4577 CD9A
A yo yo yo
When I heard bout this little nigga I ain’t want to start no beef But the way he steal rhymes he sounds like a real thief And I ain’t want to be rude and take this little nigga seat But I’m bout to run over this weak nigga like athletes feet And I can go ocapella nigga I don’t need no beat But the way your leads lyrics suck you would think the rest of ya’ll meat I am been hot so man I ain’t just bout fame I just started rapping so I’m still building my name And dog if this game is something like monopoly I got big guns in case one of you land on my property So trust me no matter what you say nigga you ain’t stopping me And even if you got guns mine like bubbles dog they pop u see And if you got nigga’s mine is deeper than the Baltic Sea And I’m a treat you like doctors tell you fix your nutrition Then act like school and go in your pockets for your tuiton And since I spit 15 bars I’m a end wit this Don’t sleep don’t move and nigga don’t get me pissed ![]() answer how ever you feel i hope i can get on the level to start battling soon |
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your flow was too weak..your vocab is too elementry..after few lines reader is able to guess what word is coming up..read some dope open micers in here and take some notes..peace...
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Thanks for the tips i'm a come back stronger and hope to be ready to freestyle
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