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Old 02-11-04, 09:40 PM   #1
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I.R Diss

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Blah ima topical head, but still cats pissin me off felt liek dropin a diss,
they aint at this forum, but I wnna get it critqued before I drop it on em..

I.R = "Infinite Riders", not Investigated Reporters

Bitten phrases, and wack MC's
slobbin and tonguin, d/rin on these
Only love from the game u gon recieve
is from your families.. <dont expect to much
of that either..
They got a femcee, no hate, on the race
but she aint a feet, I mean cmon RyanEminem beat-her
She's a ho, rap is a cock... and it's startin to tease-her
fucka I.R.. they comedy on the board...
and guess wat... nobody laughin at them either...
Then you got the leader..this cat is easier
he got hard, when I said his verse was nice..
Till I found out he O.D'd cuz he stay'd up nights
typed with no lights... to be dope.. take a breather
Your wackest on YOUR team... believe wat you believe
your suckin on the Dream Team, for some respect
And still.. your verse's get slept on like Community Center neglect
"I rock ho's, yall rock-header's" < now yall see wat I suspect?
he's dumb enough to bite a punch off Ether...
And has the nerve to remix it, and make the thread called "Suspec-tur"
"your soft as cake", compare my punches.. and you tell me who's better
I dont even kno the rest of ur Wack-Cee's.. fuck them too
and to sum it up, Fuck+I.R equals, fuck your whole crew..
Niggas said it, I read it... critqued it... then we see the famous ol' "edit"..
dont yall get-it? I did this out of bor-dom, not cuz im jealous...
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Old 02-11-04, 10:02 PM   #2
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hey, wats it called?
oh yea REPLY
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Old 02-11-04, 10:20 PM   #3
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ROFLMAO...I thought you was talkin about Token and Feeble Minded and all them..lol..who the fuck is Infinite Riders?..I've never heard of them..anyway..to your peice..

aight..I dont kow if you were really trying or not, but this wasnt a great diss. Alot of personals, but overall it was blah.Coyuld have been better. More Witty, and creative. Next time take more han an hour so you can really think. Because art doesnt get done in an hour or short time. Some of the greatest art works in the world took years..think about that..nice effort though..

hit up Oliver Clohsoff and I's peice called Was your aim..or whatever..aw shit, I forgot the name of it..it's something like that..loomfor it and give us feedback..thanks..
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Old 02-11-04, 10:36 PM   #4
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I did it in 5-10 mins, 8 mins fuckin top, throwin in the 2 mins for proof reading..
but there not at this board, there newb's and I really didnt "try", im not really a text battler, maybe ill just make an audio diss
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Old 02-12-04, 09:17 AM   #5
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Lmao..

I saw the title and already whipped out notepad for a reply.

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Old 02-12-04, 04:33 PM   #6
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lol ^, I think im just gonna stick wit topicals
^in text that is
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Old 02-12-04, 07:15 PM   #7
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i was going to bring some sonnage upon you if this was investigated reports diss. .
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Old 02-12-04, 08:42 PM   #8
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lmao at this
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