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Old 02-12-04, 01:02 AM   #1
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its hard makin lyrics that other people wanna bump in their ride///
hard to put your life into words so it forms and expressed on the outside//
thats why im a text MC, so i can let people decide how to read it///
find their own meanin without me being conceeded///
ive been defeated, ive been on top///
its not like ive never held a mic, battled and lost///
my shadow is soft, but its never fought, EVER////
thats why i walk around, starting shit, so my skin is like leather//
nothing better, than getting props on a drop///
like a doughnut who dodged being ate by a cop///
i can do multis, metas, punches and a sick verse///
but im just writing simple, without trying to rhyme, get the picture?///
if not "fuck you" till my dick hurts///
i could critizes everyone here, but im at least gonna spit first
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Old 02-12-04, 01:15 AM   #2
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props on that. not anything special but i've seen worst. i was interested
in it cuz it was short. but it was an amusing read. a couple of your lines
made me laugh, i'll leave you to decide if thats a bad thing or not. but
it was a good read. keep on writing man. elevate.

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Old 02-12-04, 01:20 AM   #3
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"i can do multis, metas, punches and a sick verse///
but im just writing simple, without trying to rhyme, get the picture?///"

then he tells me to elevate ,LOL



thanks though, at least u tryin to help n be honest
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