people say that the youth of today/
got it good in every and any perspective manner and way/
they say that compared to their life we got it made easy/
i just sit back laugh and look at these fucks like they're crazy/
cause ya'll have absolutely no idea how are life realy is/
ya'll looked down on 19 year kim with a 3 year kid/
ya'll called her a slut and slut but know half of the story/
ya'll got an image of her as that trick on yesterdays maury/
so let me tell you what happened how she got pregnant with her daughter/
it all started with the absence of her mother and alchoholic father/
whenever he bothered to get some juice inside of his system/
he would go and molest her and her younger sister/
she was ten and realized her house wasn't a place for a child/
so she packed some of her clothes and ran for 20 miles/
she got to her aunts house worn out and filled with tears/
her aunt told her that she could stay for a few years/
until the day her aunt died straight flat on her back/
because of her addiction for sex and dangerous habbit with crack/
kim was a young girl now tryin to survie on her own/
with nobody to help her except for some buged out cusins at home/
no money in her pockets and no food for her to eat/
so she dropped out of school and sold her body on the street/
then it happened one day a customer busted a rubber/
now she's not know as a growin girl she's know as a young mother/

when people are forced to do things that no one would like/
we must must al realized that that's just life/
when things are fucked up and we just wanna make it right/
when worst comes to worst just know that's life/

i'll put pt2 in when i get replies

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

i thought this was a decent piece....There was alot of emotion in this...the imagery i thought was portrayed well....original concept, havent read a piece like that before...
it was a nice read, good story...i'll check out pt.2 when you put it up....keep at it.
peace.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431

good lookin on the reply but i need more replies to add more so i don't feal like i'm just waistin my time on it aight

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun