it's dumbass niggas like this one who'll neva elevate
prolly be a pissed off rapper who neva neva ever made it
leavin non-centz posts like word perfect only fella to hate it
leavin 4 line replies and wack verses claiming to be all that
and a bag of chips i'll eat need to pull a big l and "fallback"
like autumn's hind i'll leave rollin and cry like a bawlin brat
like lisa raye sista on live '04 track (Da Brat) dumbass nigga
i'll burn you up, destroy you,plus i'll leave you sunned fast nigga
like a spaceship way too close to center of the universe trash nigga
i'll spit it as fire and yet it's cool as ice sayin my rhyme scheme off
you like this? and i ain't scared call ya name or say poppa bean soft.

faggotass nigga

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Your flow is a bit messed up in some bits, and the rhyming scene goes wrong in bits.... but its still an ok rap

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G. Sharp.
"The Lyrical Miracle"