I posted this on a different site before but no one replyed so I'm takin it to an active site... I added one last verse to it since I brought it to this site though.... Let me know what you think please.. Thanks.. Pz.

Verse 1
How can I 'see' whats happenin in my life when my eyes a blurry,
I can dress astonishing to look promising and surprise the jury,
Constantly breaking the forbidden silence wit cry's of fury,
Can I suppress whats inside or should I cry out and express my pain,
I could go on with whats always hurtin inside... my chest my vien,
But maybe this will all go away when I finally confess my shame,
For every answer I give It's just like another question earned,
Vivid images of the end like when my best friend burned,
Now you know muthafucka... Now you know so its lesson learned,


*HOOK* (All dayyy... = singing)
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,

Verse 2
Another thought escapes, and now my head is less then empty,
Dad look what youve done, this is where your presence sent me,
How many times do I think about death, in essense plenty,
I kill in the scary places, and get a flash back walkin by the same spot,
Feelings aroused, I need to find something too make the pain stop,
Something to stop the tears, like a little kids tongue to a rain drop,
Too those who oppose me and fear death I say Homie your clever,
Anybody else I want too step up, and I say only YOUR severed,
No one ever comes to visit me, I guess I'll be lonely forever,

*HOOK* (All dayyy... = singing)
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,

Believe me its hard barganin wit the devil, his cause is wreckless,
This could save you in the future, so just pause and check this,
My agression is a constant danger, so I confide in the tranquility of nature,
My lies are like an honest stranger, no one is tellin me my stature,
Some times I can honestly say Im happy and I'm livin well,
Some times I just rape my victoms thoughts and give em hell,
Lookat it from my perspective, my life is just another open wound,
No room too heal, and if any of you try you'll be provokin doom,
In my head another thought erupts, Kill those chronic enemies,
Obsessed wit death, I cant help devour my phsycotic tendencies,

*HOOK* (All dayyy... = singing)
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,
All dayyy... Another vision of death and pain,
All dayyy... Am I crazy or just Insane,

Peace.

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Who can take the time to read this??? Feedback needed on this please...

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