PARTY CRASHIN'
LIKE A BOTTLE OF BACARDI SMASHIN'
IN YOUR FACE AND SET A BLAZE
WITH A PACK OF ALREADY LIT MATCHES
IT JUST SO HAPPENS
I GOT TWO SEPERATE GLANDS
THAT SECRETE NAPALM HEATBOMB
LIKE THE "REIGN OF FIRE" DRAGONS
MY ENERGY MAKES ENEMIES OBSOLETE
IN DEED THEY CHEAT TO BEAT
BUT RECEIVE GRIEF
LIKE DEPOSITS IN A.T.M MACHINES
POPEYES GOT HIS SPINACH
WITH ME ITS HENNESSEY
HUNGRY FOR MEAT
SO TO FEED IM KILLIN MC'S
I'LL EAT YOU ALIVE
LIKE SUPERSIZED NUMBER FIVE AT THE DRIVE THRU
SPRITE WITH NO ICE
CURLY FRIES ON THE SIDE TOO
DONT THINK YOUR GIRLFRIEND CHEATS?
WELL MY PENIS AND I DO
WOULD YOU LIKE PROOF?
THEN CHECK MY WEBSITE LATE AT NIGHT DUDE
I KEEP 2 PLY ON THE TIPS OF MY SHOES
TO PROVE I DO KICK ASSES
BUT ITS NO USE
YOU CHOOSE TO USE LUBE
NOW MY NEW BOOTS MISSIN' IN ACTION
(POOOF!!!) LIKE IT VANISHED
PROOF I USE MAGIC TO DO DAMAGE
HOMEBOY I PLAN TO RULE THE PLANET
BUT THE COURTS NOT HAVIN' IT
'CUZ IM A MICROPHONE ADDICT
KICKED OUT OF REHAB FOR FALLING OFF THE WAGON
HAULED OFF FOR TAGGIN'
MUG OF BEER IN MY HAND IN
THE RIGHT ONE A TIGHT BLUNT
THE SIZE OF MIKE TYSON TIMES NINE HUN
THAT LIGHTS UP THE HORIZON
LIKE THE BRIGHT SUN
THOSE WHO NEED AUTOGRAPHS
FORM A NICE LINE WHEN THE RHYME DONE




.....................................give me some feedback. also check out my other verse "SEEIN' ME". holla at ya boy. SUPERVILLAIN

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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

Not Bad overall, Lines Seem Too Short, Needs More Vocabulary. Keep Spittin Though!
5/10

PE@CE

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

this was ok......some lines didnt rhymes......try to use longer words and keep da lines da same lenght....some nice wordplay.....4/10
not bad for a newb....aaaaiiggghhttt!!!!!

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8/10 is my opinion. i like your shit. keep postin new threads. look at some of my shit