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Ian Huntley is in.

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Ian Huntley lays he's condolences down to the corpse of Ambition.

You Don't Be Bringing Thunder, So Out Come My Deck Chairs,
Seriously, Ya Aint Wanna Fuck Wit Me ..Like Fully Errect Bears.
Ya Jus A Nervous Wreck Who Looks Scared, Waitin For The Next Chop,
'Ambition's like Miriam........... Sure You Never Had A SEX SWAP!?
Ian Huntley, reknown as the worls sickest Ambition to see you later,
Ya Asshole A Crater, Cos Ambitions More BATty MAN ..Than Gothams Caped Crusader.
Your A Gay, I Hate Ya!, you battling me was a stupid decision ya cunt!,
Cos Now prick, You'll Get Ripped Apart, ..Like Ya Own Kind, When Using Lubricant.
I got this stitched up, but like eating u up too quik theres only 1 hiccup,
Ambition's ambition is to drop nothing but crap considered shit stuff.
Like your life, you went up then you descended,
its kinda hironic, with your moronic~unoffensive~incentives.
This rap fight is over, you best throw in the towel,
like Nas and Puff Daddy, man, 'Hate me now'.
Unanticipated like Lara Crofts 1 millionth installment of raiding tombs,
Like a premature ejaculator this bitch is 'CUMMIN SOON'.

Dont be long.

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Praise this creep who think fazing me damn this negro's blind/
but my punches bout accurate as Shaq on the freethrow line/
talk shit bro I'll show you can not to stop this flow/
when I beat ya blacker then white boys wearing gothic cloth's/
you poor wit the language you choose to scorch with/
we riding porche's while this proper bitch gallops on horse's/
dont be speak sexuality shit its played learn a new speech/
you was a mistake I meant for you to be sperm in the sheets/
I aint concern what you think it doesn't bother mae/
you might be mad but you still could've got me something for Father Day/
ya other bother's and sisters didnt make thought all of ya did/
next time momma suck I'll make sure she gargle's my kids/
listen to what me and these men suggest you simple pest/
delete ya name cause its stupid to have a gimmick on the internet/
you get no compliments; why niggaz would battle you is common sense/
you just a wack ass ginny pig to help up lift niggaz low confidence's/

you'se a faggit I hold more wait then "Mariey can Carry" and end you/
"Jonny" couldn't save so just tell us how many "Cocks-ran" in you......

uppin for votes....nice battle Ian................................

Nice battle Amb, uppin on this...

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Dang, this is a tough call. Rhymes and content were on a similar level in both verses. Lots of fag jokes even by Ambition after he dissed IH for usin 'em. Punch count for each verse was the same: five that connected and two that missed. Openers and closers were about at the same level. Did I mention this was a tough call?

After reading 'em both a couple more times, I think I'ma have to give Ambition the vote. He seemed to bring just a little bit more heat, or something. Props to both'a ya.

Shoot, I didn't see that you gotta have 100 posts to vote in this one. Ah well, sorry y'all. No official vote from me.

first guy you came with some cool rymes but not that many cool punches but your new to this rap game so you was actually pretty good but you need a little more help but all in all you were pretty good 5/10

ambition you guys were bof cool but yuo came with better punches meta4s and vocab
but it was even between u to but in the end you kilt him
im lovin the mariah and johnny lines 7/10

Thanks dawg I apperciate the feedback a whole lot man. uppin this for more votes though

Ian Huntley won in my opinon some of his lines caught my eye ambition had some hott stuff but vote Ian Huntley

Uppin on this

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aight very very close both had some good puncehs and flow and was very hard to decide but ambitions line on gimmick just takes it in a very hard to call battle, and plz lose the name huntley its sick man vote ambition and plz vote 2way vs the bitch that is slaughta hes winnin 2 0 at the mo or 2way vs lock but im losin that 3 0 as well

need to post this shit here for 100 posts so i can vote