just spit sum shyt lemme see wat u got, but if u aint gangsta dont even try it

man i aint no ordinary g im special one that eryone wanna be im that platinum thug ya nigga thats me u wanna come battle me man im so good its gon cost u a fee im the chi town hood man i wish yall bitches would yea i bet u out there wishin u could thinkin u should man when u was scared boom bitch there i stood i was lookin u face to face i could see it in ur eyes u wanted out of that place cause no one wanna be with me in a chase no matter who u r no matter what type a race yea bitches im the best emcee yea bitch im the tru mutha fuckin G

I WOOD LIKE TO INTRODUCE THA NEWEST MEMBA OF DA 420 HUSTLAS, Triple_N, we only need 5 more ppl so stop by and spit sum shyt

West Coast Gangsta
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Yo.. Triply_N told me to check this.. So Check it..

Fuck you haters I'll 'Smash Your Brains in the road' to say 'Your All-Over-The-Street'..
Watch me take you out like 'Decapitating Your Ankles' watch you 'Fall-Over-In-De-Feet'..
Flip-The-Skript Hit-This-Bitch 'Make No Games' like 'Dream-Cast'..
Let-Me-In and Bet-We-Win like tha 'Final Fantasy' make this 'Team-Last'..
I see kids now 'Stealin My Rhymes' Revealin My Lines' just to show they can 'Copy-N-Paste'..
but I'm Sick-At-Worse watch me Rip-Wack-Herbs even if i 'Spit Sloppy-Then-Erased'..

^^Let me know.. holla.. 1

iight tha first part was wack but i liked tha ending spitt it again and then let me no pm me

yo platinum thug u need to spit sumthin else, try and work on ur structure and punchlines,

this is structure,
how u set this up,
get it, now
respitt and put structure in it

iight man.. i got you..


My Spits are like 'Candles' I got this nigga 'burnin on the Spot-Fast'..
How can you 'Not-accept' i spit to 'Drop-Respect' dont leave me 'Hangin' like 'Hot-Wax'..
The 'Original Gangsta' Non stop droppin like tha 'West-Side-Connection'..
I'll leave 'Niggas-in-Tears' 'Triggas-In-Fears' with tha 'Best-Rhyme-Affection'..
Im 'Spittin Flames' 'Hittin Bran Names' like 'Lighters-and-Cigarettes'..
Call me tha 'Pimp-G' im neva 'Limp-C' like poppin 'Xtacy' I'll leave 'Tight-Whores-Soakin-wet'..

Let me know.. holla.. 1

WANKSTAS!lol just playing

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stay true, cuzez

just let me talk it over wit my boi then if ur in will pm u

yo i talked it over wit my man here and he think u legit, so KILLAEFFECT welcome to 420

Say you gotta be a real g to join this crew rite?/
But i bet half these bitches run from a gang fight/
These niggas aint rappin bout real shit/
man u want the #1 crew lemme in cause im it/
nigga im from the chi/
that mean im a g til i die/
im that nigga quickhit/
so fuck with me an ill end ya shit/
im not the person u wanna be messin wit/
man im tellin u im the realest g/
but mutha fucka a 420 what i truly goin b

yo nice structure, some iight lines, u got good potential, ima check it out wit my man and ill let u no wats up, if it doesnt work out this time keep at it until u proove yo self

nice crew lol

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