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NOTE TO READER: THIS MAY BE LONG... HOWEVER IT IS WORTH THE READ! PLEASE RESPOND WITH DETAILED EVALUATIONS... THANK YOU!

Just call Jae Con a "Yankee" (WHY?) Cause everyone wanna play for 'em...
Lyrics an illegal substance (HOW?) addicting, and everybody wanna pay for 'em...I slay-forums, my text is like sex or techs... it could really fuck you up...
So if y'all keep fuckin around, jerkin me... dan snub will erupt... (4'REAL?)
Yeah! Think I'm playing? try me, I'm desginated to rip...
And y'all know who I'm wit... (Who it is?) |m|i|l|k| from the punchline-cliq...
So to y'all fake bullies around, y'all better watch who you shoving-kid...
Butcher knife in ya anal, and leave ya girl w/ white-stuff abover her lip...
And I dont use rubbers-bitch... I fuck to get-sick...
And then I'm a slit her throat while she's sucking my dick...
And |m|i|l|k| can fuck 'er while she's dead, then we'll call up-|s|k|i|t|s|...
That schitzophrantic mah'fucker will chew off her tits...
He likes 'em better stiff... rigor mortis sets-in, thats just-right...
So am I wrong for these thoughts? Think you the shit? We'll just-wipe...
I'm fuckin' outta my mind, feelin' like my personality is split...
Like there's someone else inside as i drift from reality and shit...
Why did i get off topic again, damn it jae... stay on point... (come'on)
What i need right about now is a yay lonnng joint...
"yo, |m|i|l|k| you got the shit? i got the green, get it split, put this in between!"...
"Light that shit, puff it clean, pass that shit, now reality's just a dream"...
Damn i'm a fiend...

M-to-the-I-to-the-L-K... wit J-A-E, (who?) C-O-N-V- I~C~T...
We "make-up" a tag-team sicker then "I~C~P"... (ITS MILLLKKK!)
We wake~up to bake~up... cook cake~up and shake~up the make~up of jake~up... we break~up w/ pray~nups to take~up these stray~cuts while WE PULLING OUT THE STOPS like pullin the red stakes~up (WHAT???)

"Hold-up... |m|i|l|k|, most these mah fuckers are to dumb to catch on to your wordplay and shit duke, slow the fuck down, most ya wordplay is over peoples heads fam! What you trying to say?"

I gickety~GET on the mickity~MIC... likity~LIKE... YIPPITY~YIKES!
Abuse the rickity~RIGHTS, sickity~SO, dickity~DONT... sickity~SET your sickity~SIGHTS, kickity~CUZ you mickity~MIGHT... dickity~DIE bickity~BYE the end of the nickity~NIGHT...
You wickity~WANNA fickity~FIGHT... jickity~JUST Kickity~CUZ I'm wickity~WHITE and lickity~LIKE to rickity~WRITE?
Fickity~FUCK thickity~THAT, jickity~JUMP bickity~BACK as the gickity~GAT goes bickity~BLAT... blickity~BLAT blaaaat... blaaaat...

(I'm just playing... PLAYING LIKE A THESBIAN... (LMFAO) That wasnt |M|I|L|K|'S verse... Duke was just warming his vocal chords up... haha... this is an HOF KEYSTYLE right here, nominate this shit... |m|i|l|k| stop smoking that LA-LA-LA, spit ya verse... read this TWICE, cuz the wordplay is WOAH...)

Its Jae Con and |m|i|l|k|... Punchline-Cliq alliance is breaking~out... (CHEYA)
Took a picture of ya girl "kissing" ... now duke "How she "making~out"?"... (Get it?)
|m|i|l|k| in here w/ this D|ead E|nd mah'fucker (lol) I'm better~off...
The minute I post everyone starts "RUSH-ing" like Sergi Federov...(WHOAH!)
Challanging |m|i|l|k| dont make sense like blind people watching "Passion"... (*Mel Gibson Movie)
Besides the FAB-5 say Jesus was a horrible "CROSS"-dresser, always knocking~fashion (THATS SERIOUS)
THIS IS MY LAST BAR... dont worry... relax you FAKES~
But just no... my parents kept trying... and hell you know what PRACTICE~MAKES...

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CHEYA! PERFECT!!!

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now thats serious... for my first open mic piece on rapbattles... damn... thats serious... I'm looking forward to seeing the type of responses people give on this site, thanks in advance for anyone who will peep this, cuz I know it seems I'm a rookie by my low post count, but check my creditientals... I'm a vet/mod on many sites! PLEASE BREAK IT DOWN IN DETAIL... (OR ATLEAST MY VERSE) BECAUSE I AM CONSTANTLY LOOKING TO ELEVATE...

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yeah that thing was pretty serious.
keep doin your thing.

shitt was ill keep dat shit up

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It sucked

Sorry

ok, lmfao... your opinion duke

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was pretty nice.

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do your research.