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04-09-04, 12:13 AM
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Leaving you with this...(suicide note)
IP: 06D4 9403
Queen of Snow, with her pale white skin. her icey blue eyes stare at me.
She tares at me from within. Leaves my physical state alone, But attaches herself to my memories. Though she destroyed my life, twisted this cyclone through my settlement. Though she caused me speak my final words, left me on the floor undecided. Even though she lied to me about love, about me, about us. I cannot leave her, She cannot leave me. We are not one, yet we are not seperate. We have left eachother, but are together forever. I've finally felt love, finally felt myself happy. But good things have a bad habit of turning bad when your not looking. Angelic wings, Heavenly voice. Was over run by evil, a tone that cannot be described. I finally get away from her, but can't stop thinking of her. I don't want to disrespect her ignorance, The ignorance that disrespected me. So I finish her duties and destroy the little physicality she has left me. Minions of Darkness, Hanging in the shadows of my cavern. Striking when I cannot see, Hiding from the hatred that they have built within me. Weapons they use to torture, no fatality's brought on us, just brutality to slowly end us. My desperation has filled to the point, It drips off my ridged edges and boils on my feet. I have finally awoken to the End of Life, I'm pleading that you come with me. Please accompany me on my journey away from here. I need someone to help me, Keep me away from this. I have left the Decided fate on the floor, while my soul slowlydrips off the tips of my fingers. Watching the memories that I have lost flash before me, Slide show of desperation, hatred, love, deceit, rage. The props are set, The stage is ready. 15 year show running. Ended in tragedy.. Leaving you with this.
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do your research.  Last edited by Liquor of Tears : 05-03-04 at 09:18 PM. |
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04-09-04, 10:20 AM
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IP: 9EA9 3EDF
Whoa!!!.........Deep stuff...I really dont know how I'm suppose to respond to this.....Cant really say nice(because its a suicide note), that would be like saying congrats to a person who attempted suicide, which isnt good. So i'll just say it was a deep write!
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04-09-04, 03:55 PM
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IP: 06D4 9403
Hah nah congrats is alright. I fixed the meaning so ya'll dont get weird on me.
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do your research. Last edited by Liquor of Tears : 04-09-04 at 03:59 PM. |
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04-10-04, 01:03 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: F97A 690F
That was some pretty deep shit. It takes a lot to keep my attention at 1:00 in the mornin after a long night at work............ but you had me on the edge of my seat! I guess I can say good shit?
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04-10-04, 11:36 AM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Of course... Thanks
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04-10-04, 12:12 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
yo LOT your on some dark shit man.
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  I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues! A.I.
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04-11-04, 11:14 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Im on shiny sticky shit... ut yeah, thanks.
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05-03-04, 09:18 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Up.
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05-06-04, 06:11 PM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
nice job here i enjoyed the read. real emotional piece vocab was aight and i had to read it a couple of times to get the true meaning to the whole thing,
id appreciate it if u checked mine out its called "SWEET OBLIVION".
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