If you feeling like a pimp, go and brush your shoulders off....lmao


REWIIIINNNDDD

haha sike
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All the hoes in the 'club' awaiting my 'arrival', with me its like the pimp business 'revival'/
Disembark at the club, always wearing the baby blue 'suits' and the pink pimped-out chucks/
Remarked by the girls to give them a rub, mess with me, you'll be seeing 'baby powder'/
I'll rub the powder and then 'smack you', bitch at me more I'll 'slap you' again/

We doing big pimping, we spending the g's/
Cause we doing 'Big Pimpin' in the VN/VA(Vienna, Virginia)/
Its just that same Jigga Man aka C-O-N-C-R-E-T-E/

Make 'money' everyday cause the 'hoes and the hunnies'/
I get at least 1 'fuckbunny' a day, all the bitches 'love me'/
They always 'bug me' just so they could 'hug me'/
I'd get anything I want, or anything I need/
Always rising to the top with 'extradionary speed'/
I'll get anyone to 'bleed' if they 'debilitate'/
Don't 'hate' just watch and 'wait' for my 'glory'/
Cause whenever girls see me they get 'horny'/
Guys even turn gay when they see me, and then act corny/
Better watch out cause 'envy' is your biggest 'enemy' when you...........

Big Pimpin and spending the g's/
And Big pimping in the VN/VA/
Cause they always hate on the C-O-N-C-R-E-T-E/

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Got a little bored, so did this, a real quick rhyme so my bad if it was wack

Credits to Jay-Z, as you know I used his Chorus off Big Pimpin for my hook.....


Feedback uppin

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yeah, it was iight
got a feelin it wud of been better on audio
room 2 elevate but u got potential
good luck

Thanks for the constructive critque....uppin

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yea dat shit was clean u kno wut im sayin stick wit nig

Clean?what you mean by that?anyways thanks for dropping a comment, negative or positive......

uppin

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That Shit Was Alright' ... Im Going To Say "Safe" .. You Could Work On....' And Fixx Some Lines Up A Bit.. But OverAll' It Was "Alright" For Me

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^^No doubt bro, Ill try to fix em up like you said dog thanks^^

^U^P^P^I^N^

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****Imma Female***** >.< LoL'

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OH my bad if I offended you, er...m'am..lol

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Lol No Worries Its Cool Playa'

I Hope I Don't Look To Much Like A "Bro"

http://www.face-pic.com/disasterpeice420

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Naw, I regret my wrong choice of words

I Hope I Don't Look To Much Like A "Bro"....haha naw don't worry about, hot in fact lol

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Thanks Playa' ... Hey Could You Hit Up A Battle of Mine

DisasterPeice420 Vs. Young Siz

Highly Appriciated!!!!

And Sorry Bout FreePosting And Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Na, dont worry bout it ma

ill peep it dont worry, Ill Holla

Keep it pimp

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thatwas ill .
im feelin it.
add a little more punchlines and it will be better.
nice use of vocab.
keep droppin.