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Old 04-13-04, 03:28 AM   #1
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Industry Diss *Explict Lyrics|Parental Advisory*

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Hahaha, time for you motherfuckers to die..hahha lol


Cam'ron is starting to look gay with his 'pink wanna be pimp'/
Faggot thinks he's skilled, but his skills are smaller than 'imps'/
Chingy needs to get 'hints' that he's wack when he 'spits'/
He'd do all of us at RB a capacious favor and 'quit'/
Busta Rhymes got fatter lips than 'Sum 41'/
I despise this kid, I'll leave him 'done with my gun'/
And this other bastard raps like he's on 'steroids', name's 'DMX'/
But when I come along, punk acts 'paranoid', also says it to other, but he has 'sex with the same sex'/
Faggot needs to start showing especially me some 'respect'/
Lil' Jon always 'hollers' when he's on the 'mic'/
Bitch earns a 'dollar' and thinks he's pimp, 'despite his own wife is a dike'/
Eminem doesn't concieve that people don't enjoy his 'fallacious' attempts at 'humor'/
So feminine, he even acts like a woman, and he gets his 'ass kicked', thinks he's strong when he hasn't gone through 'puberty'/
Ja and 50 gotta stop sucking each other's 'cocks'/
And they gotta stop on their act of 'wanna-be pac'!!/

FUCK THA INDUSTRY lol

Note-I know there's a cypher on this topic, just wanted to make my own thread on it though....

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Old 04-13-04, 04:31 AM   #2
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Old 04-13-04, 01:07 PM   #3
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ahah yo i was feelin dat nice punches on da disses nice vocab words
i give it a 8/10
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Old 04-13-04, 11:46 PM   #4
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^thannks dog^^

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Old 04-14-04, 05:21 PM   #5
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the flow was alittle off and the punches coulda been stronger but i think if you re-read it and write it over it would be fire
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Old 04-14-04, 06:12 PM   #6
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I was okay but the industry are based on more popular disses then dissin' Chingy, Busta, 50 and Ja, Lil Jon, Cam'ron, Eminem....SO when You Say Fuck tha Industry....Mean the WHOLE industry...Niggas Like Jay-Z, Nas, Da Band, Loon, Def Jam, Roc-a-Fella..get my drift...

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Old 04-16-04, 08:30 PM   #7
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^^yea im feeling what both of you are saying

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