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Maku JaiiLiin 5 100.00%
CyberneticTiger 0 0%
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Old 04-22-04, 01:38 AM   #1
CyberneticTiger
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From: Louisiana
PULL YOUR GUN on this mexican...

IP: C1DA C961

Your standing at the border with an ak47 i got a whole damn nation behind me zapatistas lined up with ammo/
you be like 50 cent but you'll get shot more then 9 times you'll get pissed on with puro corona and we wont leave you breathing/
My aztec soul is heavly seduced your blood will be my food for the sol aint no stopping when these mexican are out of control/
It aint hard to see mexicans get all the hate that why you never see us on tv/
you can hate is but you cant stop us i got a million cousins we aint fighting for red or blue we fighting for the brown/
Im the eagle on the cactus your the snake in its mouth/ i'll make a belt out of your skin like i was ed gein/
you should watch blood in blood out and see what i culd do to you im tired of being disrespted you aint even have to call me out to get a battle i'll tatto my steel toe on your navel/
This aint no mexican hat dance until we start a riot like anerxica you better not try it/
You cant relive the alamo cuz were taking over La raza until i die this is world war 2 your a nazi im killing every single one of you/
im doing this for all the mexicans from cpixel to brownpride.com were all over the net we aint stopping til we own this shit/
IM hardcore like ECW your soft like a feather filled pillow you can go fuck your self with a 10 inche needle pointed dildo/
This is the end of your start your an ice cube im the machine thats crushing you/

let me see you diss mexicans again i'll shatter you record you cant fuck with this mexican
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Old 04-22-04, 10:01 PM   #2
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
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From: .:----:.
I am what you can't be

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alrighty this is apparently a beef between this bastard, me and Puerto Rican nelly. he's pissed because of this verse i spit against puertorican nelly. I am not racist against mexicans, i just used the part of his name. I'm black, so it wouldn't make sense for me to hate minorities.
Oh yeah and puertoricannelly, why ya boyfriend battle me before you did?It was a battle between us. Neither one of you are on my level, so it's not beef.

I AM WHAT YOU CAN'T BE


Even demons can't seem heated as I//
I put y'all on Front street, that why ya partner seems to weak to reply//
Attack you with tactical slaps, dissever with clever hands//
Reduce you ganstas to punked inmates in never never land//
I am the truth in it's purest form, the lost Can't understand me//
I'm putting my mic on the line screamin', I am what you can't be//
The man in me can't bleed//
Cry or show weakness//
I recieved revalation from the concrete jungle, and street allegiance//
Ganstas? Can you stomach parts of this grit?//
You lips spit raps, when my shade of skin started this shit//
Hand me a feather to rip his arteries with//
I'm Reciting pac rhymes, "You wonder why they call you bitch."


alright let's get bloody.

I got robert kelly a wit cam-er-a, ready to tape you//
while i take this cheese grater and anally rape you//
I'm saddam wit writs, honor this//
...I'll make a miniature napalm, and drop the shit, hot- down yer esophocus//
And watch as it bombs and splits//Rupture the stomachs inner plumbing//
These men are running//I pop shots, guts spill i make dinner from it//
I would never spit next to this faggot//
He only slaughters himself, Like daumer with Pee Wee Herman's sexual habits//
I'm not racist, mexican, but i'm pressing the clan next to you//
So they can hang you, and the transexual man next to you//
Shut the fuck up, i don't answer to clones//
Puertorican nelly where ya at, why ya husband answer the phone//
Waved a hand and gave you cancerous bones//
The crown's mine, the very second that i ever lay hands on the throne//


To think this wasn't beef, but because this is how i did you//
I'm like christ to y'all, you can only take from me what i give you//





take this how you want it.
 
Old 04-25-04, 04:54 PM   #3
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
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JUst check this one out y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 04-25-04, 04:57 PM   #4
iamthatdude87
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word of advice does it have to be this long jus kiddin both had tight flow goodstructure
and wordplay but imma have to give it to mark urs seems like u were into it
 
Old 04-28-04, 01:19 AM   #5
big GZ
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From: MILWAUKEE
IP: 1854 8E06

I have a question for all of the real Mic Checker's on RB.com. Is it me or are Cybernetictiger aka: (viva la mexico) and Maku Shaolin (or whatever his name is) some of the weakest battle rappers i have ever heard. I am just frustrated with the fact that 2 super-weak mc's can battle each other, but someone like me who would eat both of those remedial fuckers can't get his first battle. all i am saying is: DON'T LET THE TITLE "NEWBIE" FOOL YA//I'LL CALL UP LIL FLIP AND HAVE HIS DJ COME SCREW YA// all my down south thugs will feel dat one. Funny thing is i thought about that as i was writing this quick reply and that one line would've surpassed both of theez preschool riddles. HOLLA!
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Old 05-01-04, 08:52 PM   #6
ReLiC
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Ill have to go with Maku granted it was longer he had better punches and over all pesonals i guess

Maku=5/10
Cyber=4/10
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Old 05-01-04, 09:25 PM   #7
E Looch
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maku jailin raped hi msimply put cyber elvate an learn how to make threads kid
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Old 05-01-04, 09:57 PM   #8
BoRn2SpiTT
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From: TeNNeSSee
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Flow:maku
structure:cyber
punches:maku
personals:maku


cyber u started to slip off ur flow... so maku had this won with consisten flow and punches
 
Old 05-02-04, 09:15 PM   #9
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
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IP: E489 6374

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-10-04, 06:34 PM   #10
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
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uppin 4 votes on this battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-11-04, 07:58 AM   #11
Mad Dog
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From: Crawley, England
IP: DF7B C8F7

Maku JaiiLiin got this but only just. Yo when i was on Raptapes we used to freestyle like that and i feel that was what kept me readig this but the structures on both were kinda all over the place aight at times and peeps need the personals more but do us a favour...try and put a limit to lines coz even though i keystyled like that...i prefer the RB way.

Opinion to both but v/Maku JaiiLiin
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