chek it dis just a lil freestyle aight wun

~ayo chek it wen i was youngah i always dreampt of big houses..cars and lot sa cash//but now 16 and runnin from da police jumpin fences and tossin da stash//holdin da glock on me wen i leave ma block//cuz i neva no waat beef is sturrin up..and i dont feel like gettin knocked//and 3 weeks ago i got kicked out ma house and ma moms lost respect fo me//but i still love her and i no if uve been in ma shoes den u got respect..show me//and 3 months ago i was beefin wit niggas on da otha side of da trax..poped shots and lost ma homie//and niggas like bustin shots just as much as day hoes like ta blow me//and if ya'll niggas was straight u wouldnt talk shit cuz u dont kno me//and afta all this just got out of a argument wit a mean fag wankstas//and ayo check iam one of da realest teenage gangstas//

wun .. i need some feeback holla on

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