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05-05-04, 11:10 PM
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smiley on ya mothers
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:) @ defcon collabo.. 2:21 secs over the triumph beat
IP: 80EF 45DD
this shits ill a definite banger
give some feeback on this.. im on the first verse.. defcons on the 2nd http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/bemomusic.htm
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05-06-04, 01:59 AM
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retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
i think this is definetely an improvement over your first one.. your flow still doesn't match the music all that great but its better. you might wanna try just listening to the music a couple times through before you spit, then try to adjust to that. i dunno.
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05-06-04, 02:47 AM
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smiley on ya mothers
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
yeah aiight man good looks on the feedback
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05-06-04, 02:22 PM
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IP: 2034 2B51
pretty cool man!
you gotta cool voice... and if this is your first few audios... you are gonna be good! i'll check out your others.
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05-06-04, 07:17 PM
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smiley on ya mothers
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IP: 80EF 45DD
^^^ thanks alot man i appreciate the feedback
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05-07-04, 12:10 AM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: A303 8081
got better this time flow was still a little shaky but you gotta put some emtion into ya spits or you aint neva gonna do much better sounds like you just readin shit off a monitor or somethin that second head was nice had me boppin my head an shit nice track though just put some emotion in ya spits so they can get felt
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