same thing last thread was skrewed up

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ok Go ahead Tony n SPit.

man, like i stated i set u spit thats how it goes.......
didn t you say "set it and make rules"?

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ok here we go

Tonyself.. SOund like a COcky ass Name.. I'm here calling u out,
Cause i know u's Lame, I'm Darrk.. you eva Heard of this Name?
From the night i Creep, Exposed wit no SHame
Cause they say i'm a Beast, How i hunt my Prey
Chase u thru SUn or night.. Every single Day. I dont stop
Till i Have u Captured. Thats when i'll Morph n you'll see a "Raptor"
Dont Cry or Beg, Or even Offer to give Head..
Cause i'm a beast not a Fag.. Your category you's a Hag
You wanna Live up to be a Mobster wit, Wit that Name
But Mobs are Old.. There's New things in Change
I'm a SIngle Man Army but i got a crew..
When we atch our prey, Everyone Chew's Right Thru
I'm dead serious Tony This aint a Game..
Stop and Think.. Before you Explain
Juss know that my Glowing red Eyes.. Are on you
Wishing u to Slip to catch n Rip thru you
If u gunna battle wit me, i juss though u should Know
I Have Weird, Darrk Sickness, Matches my FLow

Why The Fuck You Call Me Out Man Your Not That Nice
So Much Bitch Up In Ya....vets Had Spayed Your Ass Twice

To Make Reference U Need A Lesson, If Ya Got Em Then Ask Questions
My Sentence Hit "hard" Unlike Between Ur Leggs, 2 Inches Of Impotence

The Closest Thing To Jail Ya Been, You Was Usin Ur "cell"phone
Ude Be Like Dat Lil Kid Cryin Like When E.t. Needed To Phone Home

So Im Gonna Spit A Verse Hit It Worse Like Sacks From Jevon Kearse
U Lookin Lost Like A Baby Bird ,in The Jungle I Rumble With Verbs

Well Here It Is, Your Just A Stitch In The Fabric Of Boxer Shorts
Seeing So Much Cock In Inches Stretches Longer Than Jersey Shores

I Got Metaphors To Break Down Doors,you Spit Like Apostles Do
Religious, When Im Unforgiven You Beat Me Naw, Im Unstoppable

Hand Gun, Full Chamber Man.. You Playin With Death, Your Next
Russian Rullet Your Endangered, When Im Spittin Or Typing In Text

Dont Fuck Wit Strangers Just Angered From The Time They Spent,respect It
If Flows Were Cars U Surely Wouldn T Get Passed The Inspection,rejected

Yo Where You At.......... He Left Quik Just After My Rough Lines
So Im Leavin A Message, Incase He Ever Makes It Thru Tough Times.

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alright this was a nice battle
both of yall drop nice verses but im gonna have to give it to Tony his personals and
punches hit harder, struc was aight and i was feelin his flow a lot more
Darrk next time drop punches and personals that hit harder you won tha vocab though

vote=tony self

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123016

Aight Thx Fo Yo Feedback...............................

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Yooooooooooooooooooooooo Whats Poppin// Yo Darrk Fam Work On Yo Sruture Homie// And Half Of Dem Didnt Even Rhyme Kid// U Get Betta Some Day// Keep Battlin And U Get Betta// Yo Punches Was A Lil Wack// U Get Betta

Tony Tony// Whats Good Homie// Nice Homie// U Had Some Good Punches// And Nice Flowz// And Nice Struture// U See Dat Darrk// Dats How Yo Struture Boust To Look Like Fam// Dont Worry U Get Betta//

Vote=tony

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

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tony got this he juss completely took this his flow was on point he had great puches and it all flowed well. Darrk some of ur sit seemed a lil forced u nee to wrk on relain when u srop it seemed lke u rushed a lil.

Vote: tony