spit first

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son everyone wants to know who the fuck is you//
after you lose they gonna impeech your crew//
my moms was the block and my dad was the street//
keep running your mouth ill cut your volcal cords so you cant speek//
this kid remind me of a candy cause this lil bitch is sweet//
after i win it will be the second battle that he lost this week//
you wanted to battle me as if you the best//
bombshellkilla about to get at least 3 in your chest//
ill send boys to shoot up your home//
watch when you walking alone//
ill put it plain and simple//
ill put a hole in your face but i aint talkin a diple//

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JR.delinquents

when i challenged you, you shouldve just gave/
ill find out where you live kill you and put my initials on ya grave/

Birthday:
April 14
Age:
14
Crew:
jd style
Biography:
Jr.delinquents to the fullest
Location:
new haven
Interests:
reppin for the jd squad
Occupation:
rappin for the Jr.delinquents

all these fake niggas they rhymes i can fuckin tear/
these niggas play in the sandbox while they get picked up from day care/
my rhymes hit harder than a bulldozer while yours be soft as a mouse/
you save yo own allowance to build ya crew a treehouse/
i be the all star receiver you tha bitch wit pom poms/
i rep for real niggas yall rep for huggies and fuckin tampons/
me and my crew we use a studio not rusty tinkets/
and we got a real crew not an imagernary one like the deliquints/
so im so rich and fuckin famous i stick my pinky out drinking tee/
so plz read the name befo you challenge me/
CAUSE ILL KILL YO ASS YOU AND YO LAME ASS CREW

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need some votes upppppin.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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GOD IS CLOSE TO THE BROKENHEARTED AND SAVE THOSE WHO SPRITS HAVE BEEN CRUSHED

aiyo...here's the breakdown

1...both verses wer rather weak-ish

up everything...complexity of punches...vocab...metas


but, BOMB came harder than Young in this


Vote: Bomb.

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vote bombshell killa for a better verse
this was a close battle though
both of you need to elevate
Bombshell although you DID win you need to work on your punches
they was all weak
same for you YoungMike
both of you need to elevate big time
v/Bomb
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

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R.I.P. Bodie

we could use a little votes here plz look this battle up

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killa nice battle cuz. you tore it up. young mike you came hard but killa came harder. you did good you should have incoparted more punches instead of writtin lines with no punches. step it up kid. killa nice personala. i like the way you put his profile out there. nice opening lines.return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

vote=killa

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

Weak battle......ya'll both need to up ya complexity......

<<<LOLM<<<

Ya'll keep workin' and elevatin'.........

Vote: Bombshellkilla

aight I have to give this to bombs...He murked some stuff yo
Nice for a lil noob.....But structure was ok I liked the similies
Both work on metaphores...Young work on punches
a lil more becuz there like basic.....They need work aight
both keep elevatin...Nice battle for both

v.Shells

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cmon need a vote or votes see how i merked this man

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