20 line max
no: c , d/r , h , r , b....

Aight here we go:

i bring the hot fire that will burn this kid/
while you have no heat like winter in pj building furnaces/
you cant even rip it even if you were fucking virgins/
she wont feel yo dick like she was robbed senseless//


spit back and i'll guarntee it will be harmless/
i got you shook back i can hear you breath pausing/
you have no flow like no water in broken faucetts//

I drop this emcee like dominoes/
yo odds are stacked zero to astronomical/
i spit out those rymes while this fagit swallows/
my ryme is full with hooks while yo shit is hollow//

i got you sweating like blue collar labor/
i hurt you some much you can say that i raped ya/
you cant rip this rapper like you cant rip a piece of paper//

yo my rymes is straight fire/
set off explosives with no lighta/
i spit hot shit and thise nigga VA cant even spit saliva/

yo the 7th line supposed to read:

you have no flow like no flowing water in broken faucetts//

iM chapin~Riticule in his lips. puttin dips wen im rappin~visuals...
iT happens~to-give-you-rules, i deal punishment by slappin~sense-in-this-fool...
iM hittin~cruely with bad intensions. prehention tha things ive written~rudly...
itS lipton~juicy, cuz iM sippin~RUBY and enjoyin this chick-flic~movie...
cuZ just like "all-tha-rest"... im gettin lucky to have "saw-her-breast"..
I "call-a-test" that iM havin tha same luck smashin ^^^ "sean-pauls-chest"..
iM "fit-2-put" this as a column in da HEADLINES. in bold RED-LINES " bitch-was-took"..
"betch-youd-look"... to see if I smucked~your~rep, grilled you like a "fish-is-cooked"..
yoU better tuck~your~bets, butts-depressed in a spa. so you fuck~tha~jets...
somebody hand me~my~piece. this PRO's breath will soon be~de-creased..
leavin his past,present and future to be~di-ceased,ther callin me~da-preist...
anD im sayin the last words before his body's burried at "WHEATON"...
iM seatin his coffin by hethans, cuz its not known if hes goin to heaven or to tha place of "greifing"

Aight no doubt...

People please bless us with votes!

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uppin ...............................................#2

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somebody anybody vote

.....................uppin #3..................................

vote up, and ill hit up ur battles.................................

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quote your own damn lyrics...

i vote VA, both woz pretty gud drop for ppl new 2 tha site. VA came a bit harder and had better punches.Pro Rican i ddnt like tha flow of ur verse, if u gonna rhyme one word dont rhyme 3 times rhyme it 4 coz 3 juz dont flow if u do it 2 a beat. VA had slightly stronger punches and his structure woz better.

vote = VA

hit up ma battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...124#post1284124

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yo .:VA:. tore you up pro-rican i say you need to elevate befor you battle somebody like this again

vote/.:VA:.

this was a shyty battle but pro-rican is the worst mc i have ever fukin seen va u need to elevate also
rhymes-va
punches-va
flow-va
personals-va
vote-va
blowout foreal though i need free wins so if either of u faggets wanna battle jus pm me, here the rules
10-15 lines
no dr hate or crew
u spit first
u get 20 mins to spit after check in