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05-14-04, 02:25 AM | #1 |
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symptom vs shifty
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ok 10 lines here we go
imma spit why ill beat-you, cause i hit you with multi's that multiply to defeat-you, i chew threw youre entire crew, until their tiresome plea's, hire me, and fire-you/ im rolling-eyes, at youre stolen-lies, the way you try to immobolize, and always end up with youre back end up and colon-cries/ i dont need gun-mist, to shun-this, i TWIST, WRISTS,and with one-FIST, slam you with a page from my pun list/ i crypt-walk, all over youre hip-hop, it looks like you sip-cock, the way your top-lip-flops, when i drop-clip-shots, your spits are more like drip-drops, that flow like the runs of a shit-shop/ ok now the intellectual explanation of my rhyme lol (if needed) #1- self explanatory #2-im rolling my eyes at the fact that everything you say is a lie and stolen leaving you unoriginal, and when you try to immobilize meaning whenever you try to stop someone you end up with youre back end up meaning youre ass always end up in the air and colon-cries thats the screams youre making cause youre getting fucked with youre ass in the air #3-self explanatory #4-used as many multis as possible ill explain them, crypt-walk meaning like in hip hop ppl dance its called crip walking, and beeing spelt like crypt it also means im walking on youre grave youre crypt,sip-cock suck cock same thing right, spits are more like drip-drops meaning a spit like a rhyme and spit like water so youre spits are like drip-drops their not spitting their dripping, like the runs from a shit-shop meaning diahrea |
05-14-04, 02:28 AM | #2 |
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you got 30 minutes to post back if not you d/q'd...
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05-14-04, 02:44 AM | #3 | |
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im here.. posting soon..
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05-14-04, 03:09 AM | #4 | |
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what was that??..
Looked like An example of You Spitting your Wackest Shit get some Practice bitch cuz I'll 'Burn fInGeRs' like Kitchen Accidents Ive noticed his frail like Females u probably sound Feminine when you Laugh and you aint skilled, closes you'll get to that is Eminem in your Av ur Verses are Worthless recognize ur a bitch and Go Purchase some Purses and new Panties and Bra's Cu in the Baddest of Brawls this Faggot Panic and Falls, needing 911 but cant Manage to Call after I've Damage his Jaw Especially since its a MIRACLE you step-to-me like someone in a Wheelchair before the battle started i had u shook and Real Scared u should have listened kid cuz u got more Bitch in You than a Prison Bitch enough of this like vegetarians im Sick of the Beef its time to give u a little Time to 'Gather Yourself' as you Pick up your Teeth
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05-14-04, 09:00 AM | #5 |
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ok good battle we got here...uhm i like explaining these but whats funny is the winner of this one did exactly what he was gonna say he would do beat you with his multi's and ill obviously explain why he won or in my opinion won
people on this site think that only punch lines are gonna wn a battle but ask yourself what is better a strong punch line or a strong punchline with metia's and multi's, obviously the meta and multi's one is gonna be better if their incorporated into the punches right, and shifty did exactly that, he brought better multi's with strong punchlines, he had good flow and structure also symptom youre punches hit hard also , and also you had the structure and flow also, but like shifty said it was gonna be the multi's that made the difference and he was right.... vote shifty |
05-14-04, 09:01 AM | #6 |
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uhm where is the voting pole at ???????????.......
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05-14-04, 09:11 AM | #7 | |
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IP: F40A FCD2
OK. Well.
Fingaz, yes you ha dmulties, but some of them really didn't make much sense. Anybody can throw together a shitload of phrases that rhyme well, but ur still battling. You came with basically no good punches, You had a couple, but they were very, very obscure. Not really credible for a battle. Symptom, you had a few good lines, like, "get some Practice bitch cuz I'll 'Burn fInGeRs' like Kitchen Accidents" but there was also alot of simple shit that was lame. If you'd kept going the whole battle like the line abve, you would have swept him away. As it was, I felt that Symptom got it, merely coz he had better punches and some of FIngaz multies didn't really make sense. Vote - Symptom. |
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05-14-04, 09:17 AM | #8 | |
Killin' G'z
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Shifty - Good spit man, you had md multi's in there.. and your flow was hott.
Best Line - i crypt-walk, all over youre hip-hop, it looks like you sip-cock, the way your top-lip-flops, when i drop-clip-shots, your spits are more like drip-drops, that flow like the runs of a shit-shop/ Worst Line - NONE Symptom - Iight spit man, you had some good flow.. and your punches were iight. Best Line - Looked like An example of You Spitting your Wackest Shit get some Practice bitch cuz I'll 'Burn fInGeRs' like Kitchen Accidents Worst Line - ur Verses are Worthless recognize ur a bitch and Go Purchase some Purses and new Panties and Bra's Cu in the Baddest of Brawls this Faggot OVERALL - Close battle.. but I gotta give this to Shifty his multi's were killer.. and his punches were better. Sym your shit was good too.. but some of it didnt rhyme.. work on your flow a bit and maybe some multi's and personals. VOTE - Shifty RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755
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05-14-04, 09:18 AM | #9 | |
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where the hell is the poll so I can drop my vote?...
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05-14-04, 09:24 AM | #10 |
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i know something fucked up when i was putting his name in it didnt work then posted neways this i guess has no choice but to be an unofficial battle....unless i can find a way for the person who tkaes care of the site to add the win to whoever wins but i dont know.......
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05-14-04, 09:34 AM | #11 | |
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can you still retrun he fav man?...
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05-14-04, 09:35 AM | #12 |
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yeah for sure i can
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05-14-04, 08:16 PM | #13 | |
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forget a Poll.. why dont u just do it tha old fashion way, counting
sHiFty-2 Sym- 1
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05-15-04, 03:01 AM | #14 | |
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uppin this shit
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05-16-04, 06:16 PM | #15 | |
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wheres tha votes?.. god this site sucks dick
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