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Old 05-15-04, 02:41 PM   #1
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Deepression...Check It

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Yo Deepression equals neglection,
want to shove it down wit no reckelction,
but it alwase comes back wit no controle or selection,
want to put it back,
wit a snap of a finger just like dat,
so i put it back on the rack,
so it wont yack,
but its uncontroleable it will return,
and when it does i will feel it burn,
then i shove it back down and now its my hearts turn,
ill get over it fast cause im quick to learn,
and when it does at last,
it will seem like it was fast,
but it will hunt me again like everything els in my past,
so my battle stats and future beefs can kiss my ass!

I wrote this off the top of my head this was not pre-writin....and i like to write shit that means a couple different things at once (exept for the last line in this poem) so what ever you want it to mean thats what it means have fun wit it and tell me what you think it means aaaaight!!!!????


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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 05-17-04, 03:05 PM   #2
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Yo im uppin to get reactions come on yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-17-04, 07:16 PM   #3
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nice............
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Old 05-17-04, 09:11 PM   #4
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Ehhh. It was ok... But if you write poetry again... PLEASE spell things right... You make pieces sound or look like shit with a lot of shorthand or easy words misspelled. Besides that it hink it had an alright message and some good emotion... Would have been much better revised and rewritten... Alright drop
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