Here we go.

We met On a Beutifal Day Sun Shining So High and Bright//
We never Could be Split Up She was My Light at Night//
Monumetal Moments and Love were always In our Path//
I would Put Cards on her Desk and Roses in her Bath//
It was hard to Seperate Us we had a Amazing Connection//
Very Intamate and Passionate always left with an Errection//
Then on that Gloomy Morning when the Truck Came into Our-Lane//
Rushed By Ambulances to the Hospital in So Much Pain//
I woke to Not find her Sitting Next to My Bed i was Wierry//
I prayed to God she was ok i Guess he Didnt-Hear-Me//
I stumbled into the Hallway Hoping to Find her Alive//
The Nurse told me the Horrible News She "Didnt Survive"//

Sommin else.

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Great emotion and a nice story... The whole thing was good, but was a little ruined with the erection part.. I like this one better then the first one i checked... This had a little more emotion and a poetry feel to it. Nice drop

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it was deep, i agree wit ^^^^, should of kept the errection out, not every single line has to rhyme in poetry. as long as you still express what you are trying to get across, n this poem has been one of the best ive read so far on here. I have only read about 5. I'm looking forward to reading more, keep them coming, stay da fuckk up.. peace

yo this was a good piece....not bat imager and it had good emotion keep it up man.....i really liked the emotion that you put into this and the expression along with deepness that you put into it

can you peep the 4 pieces i have in my sig.....thanks