you called me out u spit first...
15-20
no crew
no d/r
5 pm tommarro

fool i neva agrred to the battle i asked u if u wanted two and second u fuckin newb dont make rules up unless i fuckin agree to them

aight then....u a pussy.....call me out than back down...thats weak....so u gonna battle or wat yo...holla

ur the fuckin pussy from michigan im not gona back down from my bitch u motha fuckin wanabe

so u agree...we gone battle bitch....just agree to the rules and we will battle...

u spit first i dont prewrite my shit like u do i kno u prolly got it ready already and u talk all hard but ur from fuckin michigan so less talk and go

aight heres my verse....
remind me next time we battle to call you lyrical discretion...
cause he cant connect a punch just like he cant bone an erection...
and this little bitch is nuthing but a talker...
growing up in michigan has made him as soft as the water...
since you'll neva know wat your girls pussy feels like i'll tell ya its as tight as the pants on steve urcle...
when she suckin dick her heads bobs in and out like a turtle...
and when i cummed the bitch didnt swallow she liked to gurgle...
hes so pussy in michigen the toughest thing to do is shoplift...
and when your fuckin your dog is the only time you cock shit...
your mother and father will cry when they see what i did to your body...
and in your will ill make sure it says to give DON his hotty...
he took so long to post cause he notebook ripped so he needed some tape...
and the only gang hes been in was wit his friends and mom in a gang rape...
the 19 stands for the age this bitch is still a virgin...
hes angry cause all that masterbatin can get discouragin...
the most obvious reason he was late to battle is cause this boys a bitch...
but hes late cause he was in San Francisco wit his boyfriend tryin to get hitched(city where gay marriage is legal)...
just stop this battle immediately and do somethin your good at like suckin your own dick...

yipity yiptiy yap yap yap don wat the fuck is that…
I am big just like tha great big buda and I throw bows just like luda so wat the fuck u think u gonna do…I haven’t even start and your almost threw…to the other side you go…so just stop spittin…I am here and im cumin ah hittin’
Everybody knows that lyrical is tha best and trust me I can pull the weight
Give me one minute and look what I can create…(for sure its gonna be great)
What I say is how I play and don’t give a fuck about what you got to say
And everyday is a brand new day but when you fuck with me you bet your soul Cause if you lose you cant live no more and don’t worry about diggin your grave Cause I am diggin it with this lyrical shit just read and listen to how I spit...Like a joint you gone get lit reading my shit and then nigga I puff and then your hit…your like ja nigga…you tryin to clap back but you cant clap back if you aint got no cloths on your back…Cause you done screwed and messed up your rhymzzz…now your gonna pay for your lyrical crimez…I bring it hard and straight…whats that nigga….U TRYIN TO RELATE????
What I spit is concrete…I never repeat…cause I am a world champ…but u cant handle that…nigga this is a fortune game and that why you lame...NO top nothch GAME(over)
Just observe on how I flow…talking shit that I know…I flip the script and throw out some pimp shit…I will smoke u like a zooter…then move to the main course….your sistas pooter…

one sided. lyrikal u had no punches. don u had some good disses to his girl. haha i liked that.
don

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uppin for votes if you vote i will return the favor thanks pc

lyrikal you surprised me you held ur own against don and he is pretty good.. but i got to give it to don he just had overall better punches and structure... but i want to see a rematch on this battle.

v/don

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

wun sided...

lyrical were da punches at ..were da flow,,were da structure...
no hate but elevate
DON u had betta flow betta punches and u had a structure
so my vote
DON
holla wun

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votes Unanamous'' , better punches, personals, flow, and stucture.//
vote: Don // his made sense and i could read it without pausing,, legit

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quote your own damn lyrics...