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Old 05-23-04, 11:02 PM   #1
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God's Tear

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Sitting Upon a Cloud Watching his Creation by Destroyed..
Wondering why We Fight over a Life which should be Enjoyed..
He Has Sent Angels to Protect the Innocent and Defend the Helpless..
He made us to Love and Care for Eachother not to be Selfless..
He ask's Himself Day after Day why our Pation is To Hurt..
Created to be a Land of Love made from his Blood and Dirt..
He doesnt want to Steer us to the End but Going there is his Fear..
Viewing this has Set off His Emotions and he Release's a Tear..
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Old 05-25-04, 02:40 PM   #2
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im feelin ya context man..... thats some truh shit u spatt there.... and it flowed nicely too... keep that shit up...~1~
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Old 05-25-04, 02:42 PM   #3
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Pretty nice... Good emotion. I think it would have been nicer if you made it longer. But it was good as it is... nice drop
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Old 05-27-04, 03:19 PM   #4
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that is some shit..............keep that shit going man I can actually pictures god tear what a poem.
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