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Old 05-24-04, 07:16 PM   #1
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Bible of crushed roses

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She grew up in a bad place, smiling face; it’s what she could do
The hood knew her fate and the horrid fact her blood would spew
But should you forget about her and her life living in poverty?
I pen philosophy of tragic deaths cause most never end properly
My friends knocking me cause I’m with the same girl for time
I pour lines into her ear about our love and I feel it the more I’m
Realizing your Brian spends days just laying with you cuddling
I’m threw struggling I say to myself, so I pop the brew bubbling
I cue huddling with my mind, heart, and soul and decide it’s now
Reality hits wow! It’s now, or never, so I speak and spit vowels
My stomach pit growls wish I could just let her see my butterflies
Developing in my stomach from larva of nervousness as stutters try
To let shutters fly off my windows and open up to her for always
All days spent with you girl visions of me carrying you in hallways
Your calls daze me and I lust to touch you every time we’re together
Want to be near forever ask you to marry me and I saw sheer pleasure
Clear weather we ask for as we plan our wedding day in our heads
The morning hour sheds light onto our love as we lay on flower beds
The showerhead floods sending mother earths tears streaming down me
I found me my queen and I’m not letting go until I can crown thee
News astounds family, but they knew our love would lead us this
Hugs-kiss years of love poured into one night, ma our love’s bliss
We walk and rugs hiss our love hymn in rhetoric, I blushed doses
When we first kissed and touched noses because we rushed poses
I’ll profess love over my Bible full of crushed roses at altars quick
The stalkers sick he waits for prey and pounces cuz the walkers thick
But you’re promised to me so you try to resist and rip his black mask
He takes a knife to your back mass and your brain loses its track fast
He made the attack last and left you laying in trash like he’s a sly crook
I cry shook at the lives took, you’re now another flower found in my book

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Old 05-25-04, 07:38 AM   #2
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Wow, that is really good!!!
I felt a lot of emotion in it.

The word "Love" used lightly

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Old 05-27-04, 07:05 PM   #3
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Old 05-28-04, 11:46 AM   #4
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good poem it was touching in a way...i would like to see more of this from you
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Old 06-02-04, 03:47 PM   #5
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thanks good feed back uppin
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