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05-31-04, 02:42 PM
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On The Edge
IP: C1DA C961
Time places a limit, on minutes of life you can live.
Surrounded by devils, demons of life taking what you give. This is affection, a section of your heart for a person. Pushed harder and harder, suddenly it becomes a burden. Hurting everyone and everything, this love burns. You keep living life motionless, even as this world turns. You earn a spot, but you think God is taken life away. You slip into suicide, waiting to die on just the right day. The cliff you stand on and hang on, begins to break. You take a breath, whatevers left, begins to disinegrate. Hate fills, you take pills to get rid of the depression. Expressions turn to a smiles, your death begins sketchin'. Lessons you've learned, turn in your mind, your eyes close. You were on the edge, but you decide to let go of the rope.
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05-31-04, 11:01 PM
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Half Lyricist/Half King
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IP: 3240 794D
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