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06-13-04, 09:28 AM | #1 | ||||||
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First freestyle here
IP: 342F 541F
I'll fuck up yo' senses like a histamine/
When I'm done, you be nothin but ancient history/ Raise yo' lines like you think it's actually shit to me/ When I'm done, all you raisin' is just a fist to me/ ( ) I can get people pissed at me/ The who, when, where, and why is still a mystery/ I enrage MCs just with the clatter of a couple keys/ You can wrap up yo' jimmy and you still can't fuck wit me/ I can make myself into somethin', Gs/ And I ain't talkin about a walkin' target for disgruntled Cee's/ To prematurely end myself is not what I truly believe/ I got the rest of my life to go places, ya see?/ It ain't my fault if you become a casulty/ Rap is war, motherfucker. I don't take it casually/ Bombs will fly everywhere, explodin' this scene/ And check who's droppin' em. Primus17/ I do what I can. What y'all think? |
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06-13-04, 10:33 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Nope
& how the fuck can you freestyle in TEXT?!"?"
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06-13-04, 06:08 PM | #3 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 3BBB 91DE
yea im wit soul on dis keep elevatin and realise there is no text freestyle....
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06-14-04, 08:10 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 0DD6 0DB0
Well, at least no one sayin' this sucks a fat nut...
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06-14-04, 08:12 AM | #5 | ||||
RV AUDIOS BEST
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IP: 7402 EED9
lol/\ it is called a keystyle and you got to ber one of the smatest people i know
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06-14-04, 08:16 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 0DD6 0DB0
Damn, I get the point. How many more people gonna tell me it's Keystyle and not Freestyle...
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06-15-04, 07:39 AM | #7 | ||||
darkmanner
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IP: 0F6A C933
Just one more
ITS A KEYSTYLE NOT A FREESTYLE!!! OK i'm done. The rhyme was OK i suppose
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06-15-04, 02:03 PM | #8 | |||||||
Suspended: Cheating
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IP: 7C15 C1EB
u cant say its to bad for a first, but u still far, keep elivate'n, n you'll get better.
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