since i was born a spic there was no real chance to succeed in this world that is all about money and greed un like them other kids born with family that noe english that read to him every night before he goes to sleep so for me it was more of challnge growing up only really noeing spanish and my parents not noe any more then i did i had to learn english my whole famliy furture was resting on me but it's no problem i'm destin to succeed with only a couple of pennies in my pocket its if my parents can work as hard is they did to get us to where we is today i noe i can make it to a better day a day when i wont have to go to 7 11 and pay with pennies till that day i just i just work my hardist to leave a foot steps to my kid to follow so one day my famliy would say to my kid your dad was a great man hopefully inspire them to do some thing great and hopefully it wont be no problem to them

Need to fix the structure of this ...and also try and make it flow...Understood the subject...but it was like you were jus talking...

yeah needs alittle bit of work..but it was not bad...