Lets do dis u 1st nigga

nigga you aint even inform me that we was battlein, but o well, an plus you aint set up tha rules so i will.

10 lines
no d/rvotes
no crew votes
no cheatin
lets go.

my bad my computer froze.

You can call me babe ruth, cuz im knockin this one out tha park
my rhymes "phat" like free's ass on 106 & park//
i verbally assassin dudes, like i gotta gun in my mouth
they think bullets comin at em' when its only words comin out//
nickname shredda, cuz im constantly rippn on cats
its like i got diarrhea, cuz i jus keep shittin on cats//
ima win this battle an get all 5 votes
cuz my lines can kill cats like two lines of coke//
this wolf aint has his rabbie shots, an he lack tru skillz
its ova, poison jus tore u up like black people do bills//

had to hurry, holla

nigga are you gon write ya verse?

man if you dont write in 20 minutes you gettin disqualified playa. so come tha fuck on.

Nockin Shit out da park, stop lyin you should stop it
you say you poison but bitch im more toxic
Imsteeper and colder than a skii slope
you still say you poison but im the antidote
Im tired of this fake ass clown
Big Bad Wolf turned his beef into puppy chow
cuz i huffed and puffed and blew you the fuck down
i wasted time now im ready 2 go
i ate dis bitches beef slow
this nigga wasnt nothin but skin and bones
and im still bloodthirsty and ready for more

lmao great finish. uppin for votes........................

Woah... I felt like the Wolf was seriously lacking in serious hurt. I liked Poison's structure, rhymes, and flow better. Plus, he was funny (which is basically the key to my vote; gotta bring the pain and the laughts). Wolf seemed kinda choppy and didn't hit hard enough.

Vote goes to Poison.

My battles...
MC AK vs. Miss. Lyricist
Tweeza vs. Miss. Lyricist

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lol aight this battle wasn't no comparison poison took this with out a fight....wolf would have had a better chance not even postin and gettin dqed
I was feelin poisons line:this wolf aint has his rabbie shots, an he lack tru skillz
its ova, poison jus tore u up like black people do bills//
Um...Wolf I coudn't even pick out a favorite line from u
Opener:Poison
Structure:Poison
Multies:None
Closer:lol..Poison
Poison juss took this all around...so my vote goes to him

Vote:Poison.....return the favor:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130117

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Go head trip it aint nutin to drop a clip again....got my dogs to catch me when im fallin....pass the weed and hennesy i hear it calling Nigga

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thanx for tha votes still uppin..............................

BBW-You wasnt really hitting hard and plaininly you didnt
come hard as needed....SImilies and metaphores and multies
lacked

Poison-You didnt really hit hard either but you
did take this by having everything better

v.Poison

Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130117

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flow poison

humor poison

punches poison

overall vote poison

note poison man i like your shit stay up man keep that stuff comen i like it as for the other guy elevate man

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uppin............................................. .........

good job poison I totally underestimated
wat u cold do
keep it up and maybe you can beat Big Bad Wolf one day




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