10-12 lines ite man, no crew votes.
I will spit 2moro mornin, u spit first.peace

what where you smoking when you got the name rocks//
i heard you suck cocks, this guy's idol is goldie locks//
you wake up in the morning with a taske of semen//
when ever he's on the toilet he scream's "got release this demon"//
you don't wanna battle me son youve got no chance in hell//
ill take your mum and sister out, well have a threesome in a hotel//
your getting murdered i know you wanna cry i can see it in your eyes//
i bet no 1 thought i could rip the shit, i can see your all suprised//
im gonna have to go now i hope you don't choke//
you better shut the fuck up cos plustwo just spoke//

Plus two is like a dumb dog coz his lyrics only got him "choked"
n reason I called myself rocks was 2 cum on n leave u "smoked"
Got this tied wit "rope".. u ever won 2 battles??........."umm nope"//
Newbs be gettin me "vexed" tryin ta "text" wit hence "complexity"//
u gotta "accept" that this gun be ya 10th "wreck" for tryin ta rap "wit-me"//
ya bad rap are dtp just like "luda".. so im gunna dispose of ya like a "hoover"//
My raps gun get 2 u in ya sleep 3 days in a row.. plus-two like freddie fukin "crougar"//
like hoes u gettin "smacked".. gunna have u on ya "back" just for tryin ta "rap"//
ya leggless im suprised u aint "collapsed"..check the equasion..1+1=2. plus two="crap"/

plus two u got this one ur rhymes were on point this round good battle plus two
u got my vote but i can vote polls yet cause i dont have 20 yet i just transferd to this some im a need some votes on servin them up vs a.k.a

so vote for servin them up

yo plus two maybe we can form a crew if dont have one if u do maybe u can recruit me

allright common noobie battle but i think plastwo won this won though h came a little harder with his pounches but thats about it

struture:Plus two
begin:niether
ending:Rocks
linez 2-3:Rocks
Rymhing:PLus two
tight battle but
V=Plus Two

aight 2-0 me uppin

rocks-

this was arite for a comeback opener... nice bar...good rhyme...no vocab 5/10

doesn't make a good bar...get both lines to rhyme... 3/10

doesn't make a good bar...get both lines to rhyme...some vocab 5/10
-my suggestion-
ya bad rap are dtp just like "luda"..u gotta "accept" that this gun be
so im gunna dispose of ya like a "hoover".ya 10th "wreck" for tryin ta rap "wit-me"
-somthin like that to make are bar ya know what i mean

same thing...hard to read not a good bar bad rhyme 3/10

bad rhyme bad ending...2/10

overall 18/50
-try to work on some tight bars and you will rip...

plustwo-

ok... good opener... nice punch...flow...rhyme 7/10

ok punch... good rhyme...flow 5/10

good punch and a little personal 7/10

ok rhyme... hardly punched 5/10

good closer ok rhyme 6/10

overall 30/50
- a little more vocab and punch and that would be some hard shit

vote-plustwo

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my vote goes to rocks he was way better than 2 plus 3 or whatever ya anme is....

rocks
punches-8/10 nice
vocab-8/10 nice
structure-8/10 nice

2 plus 3
punches-5/10 horrible
vocab-7/10 getting better
structure-5/10 to basic

my vote goes to rocks for better punches and for havin better stats but mostly by punches
v/rocks

can u return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

plus 2 cam wid a basic style n a basic flow that y am giving the vote to rocks, he had the better of the punches n the better of the flow n wordplay, he was also more creative wit the words....but u both need 2 elevate

v - rocks

drop 1 at this link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

aight rocks you wouldav taken this if all your lines rhymed but you lacked it really,
plustwo thats was aight but you need to start elevatin, to develope more skills cos to me they look limited. lol no hate but im gonna have to give this to plustwo... due to rhymin

plus two hold it down I'ma give my vote up for him because Rocks after the first two times you said rap did you think you could rhyme it again the next two?

vote: +2