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Old 06-27-04, 01:04 AM   #1
AO AKA GOT-UM
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Gone Away(love Poem)

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My Tears Came Down Like The Rain
All I Felt In My Heart Was Pain
I Never Felt The Same Again
Thats Why Im Putting This Down In Pen
Why Am I Hurting So
Why Did You Let Me Go
In My Dreams I Still See Your Face
But When I Awake Im Alone In An Empty Place
I Never Knew How Much I Really Cared
But How Could I
What Was There That We Shared
When Ever I Saw You I Got The Chills
You Have Such Good Looks,it Kills
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Old 07-11-04, 10:19 PM   #2
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i like that poem keep up the good work homie
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Old 07-12-04, 02:50 AM   #3
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good poem kidd...feelin it...had good emotion n it flowed good 2...nice drop...peace
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