iight blind spit..8-10 lines
due 20 mins from check in
no hate, crew or d/r votes
good luck..

checkin in...

only thing good from Philly is cheesesteaks and freeway ..
leave ya stomach uneasy wit my flow like trying to eat cake and freebase ..
when battlin me ya just fuckin ya self like kids who masturbate ..
all i need is one punch and i'll leave you Ko'd like outta shape Heavyweights ..
cats call me Big Ben Wallace cause im the king of the Boards ..
singe ya vocal chords and send pounds of dick to ya whores ..
neva stop make ya chest explode leave nuttin but sweater slop ..
when the beretta pop ya betta hop on a celly and get a cop ..
cause METAH aint quittin till ya blood freeze and hearts stoppin ..
shockin lyricsts resemeble dentists the way i make the jaws droppin ..


something quick for ya homiee

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-Immortal Technique

i’d grab ur verse n slice it with incisive incisions as these lyrics attack to make derisive collisions
envision ur body sliced in divisions…the battle just started n voters already know i’ll be the decisive decision
i’m precise with precisions when shooting to puncture and rupture your molecular structure
fuck a fight…im the type that’ll swiftly snipe a bullet thru ur windpipe at a secular juncture
battlin me? if you were an old man growin you still couldnt manage (man age)
continue arguin and i’d take your whole innocent clique out like collateral damage
my writing can gauge n span rage to release rampage, as each page is liver then i am on a damn stage
battles engage…you win? thats bout as truthful as the accusation that Em didnt scam Cage
metah think he sik, throwin 'paper into rotatin propellers' wont get him a 'fan-page'

meta man seriously i peeped ur battles u have some nice prewrites try writin a fast verse cause u always use prewrites. dubz u had some nice personals some were prewrites which u never do but its aight cause ur whole entire verse wasnt.nice flow.meta had an ok flow didnt like the verse or flow or punches try a fast verse next time u battle not notebook prewrites

v/dubz

Metah - iight verse. Had a couple of good punches. Ya had like no personals. You didn't really have anything extra bout yours. It was just another typical verse. Nuttin special.

Dubz - Had some good punches. Tha extra you had was your vocab and multiples. Real good. But about half way through you started to fade a little bit. Try to keep it hype through tha whole verse. Somethin nice.
Vote - E Dubz.
Return tha favor. Link in my sig. Don't read this and blow it off. Go vote.

thanks fo da feedback..uppin

lol this was a very good battle overall but i gotta give this one to e-dubz
he had more metaphor..better punchlines... nice personals ....the flow was alittle off but it made alot more sense then your verse metahpgusikz....overall i gotta give this to e-dubz for having alot more punclines and more personals....and metahphyscikz ..your verse had way better structure then you did e-dubz..you really need to work on that....


vote=e-dubz

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uppin

aight yall both was aight
met u had nice flow and structure some punches
dubs yur verse waz better wit better punches ..slo down ya linez tho aight playa
anyways nice flow
u win thi wan dubs

v/e-dubz

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