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here yo go boy

i was spittin venom in a fit of rage all last night/
hey easy killa i know after this battle it will be hard to sleep alright/
cause this rhyme will still be spin'n donuts off in ya mind/
now it aint ya fault that every time yo jackoff/
ya moms and ya hand scream RAPE/
look at this fool thinkin his rhymes are hot/
but really thay aint/
and thay still wouldnt be hot/
if he typed them in the middle of a fire/
or if he was cought ass rapin a firefighter while hes pullin an all nighter/
but the only way that thay would be is if you were the Devils son/
but how could that be/
when your ass is to sceard to touch gun/
but then you say you gangster/
but when you say that you gangster/
but the only name for you that comes to my mind for you is "WANKSTER"/
but look at this fool hes haven' a caniption/
cause i just put him on rapper-suspion/
for havein weak rhymes and lines/
and makin me waste 20 mins./
of my busy days and nights/

(now im a finish you up with the closer)

hey NOW i would of madE this a pink slip battle/
but you would get cought for skipin class/
cause while you were beatin off to naked pictures of Lance Bass/
i was teachin RB history/
now you should of came class/
cause now you ass is the fourth chapter of my Commuinty RB book/
"All The Niggas I Turned Into Ancient RB History"/

uppin for your verse nigga

come on man check in or something i sent you the link 45 mins ago

servin them up im head over hills screens fall like the crazy one tryin walk in high heelsyoung ass nigga cant take a lost nigga like bill collecters keep emailin my house i aint never scared so come get bitch this nigga like a baby diaper full of shit fire up the weed cause its time to get throwed like candals on birthday cake im gettin blowed .
flows like the weather when its stormin make this bitch open wide like he was yawnin laws give him a ticket cause when over the speed limit cause he suck dick at 60 mile per minute dumb ass bitch told me some gay ass shit when he horny now he hittin more notes then a choir on a sunday mornin its plan and simple but but dent in ya cheeks and i aint talkin bout dimples im a well know nigga so i have no plex servin them up in this bitch and i came to wreck

how u love that crazy one put that down ya throat.................

aight....this was close.

Crazy u had alot more verse. But it was a lil choppy an strecthed. sum nice lines in it tho.

Servin. Ur's was alot shorter in lines but lengthier in bars. your's flowed alot better wit the same quality of punches an personal's....

Ima have to go wit Servin...based on the flow factor. nice work guys.

ayo drop an honest vote here. thanks

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132403

gotz to go to served, just for i think his went together better, wit punches and personals. his was just a lil short, but boi gotz my vote. NO HATE. peace.

v/servin

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serving it up gets this one i liked his alot better and abetter flow

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servin them up had a good rhyme structure wasnt dat good flow was good punches was good ima have to say servin them up won

servin had wack structure n some words connected wid others by accident, flow wasnt 2 gud but the altogether verse hit harder than the crazy 1's verse

crazy 1 u had better structure but ur some lines were streched n punches were weak..

v - servin em up

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062