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Conflict
IP: E265 E924
Verse 1
Saw your men, lined up for hope saw em rolling up paper with some dope You think this war is a big fat joke Ill raid your bank account until you're broke. Look at your nation begging at the trainstation forfeiting their creation discrimination a step down for you means my elevation. Hold up your weapons and scream rearrange and order your regime this is my esteem this is my dream. I know, you know this is our conflict this is where you'll get your ass kicked. I know, you know this is our conflict I'm a killer rhyme sprayer addict. Verse 2 Choke on the fumes I'm fumin rip out the flowers that be bloomin camera lens open, zoomin you poor, no food, consuming. This aint a battle, this a war drown me, float me to da shore Take a piece of me to the floor pay the whore and close the drawer. Open the fire, trigger your gun shoot me and you shot your son. Clean your conscience, clean it clear heat up the crowd, hear them cheer. This earth dont need you here, dont need your hate, dont need your fear. I know, you know this is our conflict this is where you'll get your ass kicked. I know, you know this is our conflict I'm a killer rhyme sprayer addict. Fall into prison if looks could kill I always had the vision that made you ill. Fall into prison call in your men my power has risen Ill beat you down over and over again!
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IP: 8DC3 7895
yo it seems to me like ur makin songs.....u a song writer or an emcee? wtf quit wit da "verse 1, verse 2" let it come together man my advice to u
~~1~~ i seen ya otha drop so i thought id give u advice.... |
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IP: DFD5 B866
hmmm.....I really think you should make each line longer & use bigger
vocabulary in your drop to make it better ![]()
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I see dumb people
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
yea use longer sentences and betta vocab pc
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IP: 7DC4 25CC
aight, thanx y'all
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