aight here we go...

15-25 lines
no DR
no Crew votes
no feedin

EXPLAIN YA VOTES!

imma drop right now... checkin in

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16 KOs 19 WINS

Aight ill get started and drop after you do.

aight check dis check dis....

step back while PAPPA bitch slapps anotha newbie Emcee/
lil motha fucka didnt see it commin, thought he had da balls to face me/
QBsmasher commin to it like a blitzin line backa gettin caught short on the play/
PAPPA just hit Moss in da endzone despite you tryin to ruin his day/
this kid didnt know what to do when PAPPA answered his open call out/
didnt know if he should run and hide or hop up on stage and shout/

aight listen da fuck up lil hoe cause theres somethin yo' ass needs to know/
BIGPAPPA dont take it easy on newbs, he slaughters em hard core fo' sho'/
lil nigga best watch what you say and how you say it/
cause BIGPAPPA be da wrong motha fuckin Emcee to fuck wit/
now i know your sorry you decided to battle me and its okay/
silly faggots just to gay to come real wit it any way/

Step off cause here comes your lyrical death on da text/
PAPPA place da GAT to ya mellon in front of everyone on da set/
i got an itchy trigga finger so say a quiet prayer fo yo self/
cause soon enough youll meet lucifer and spend eternity on da lyrical shelf/
QBsmasher aint got nothin on Tha PAPPA dats so BIG in this biz/
you could neva even begin to fill battle shoes like hiz/
aight nigga im almost done playin wit yo' ass, got betta shit to do/
PAPPA makes it look easy when he rippin wanna be's like you/
this shit is all ova, finished and done/
BIGPAPPA straight smacked dat ass son/

BIGPAPPA76

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He let out so many moans, I thought he was passin a kidney stone
His bows were thrown, like malone, all he hit was my funny bone
So many bars, I had to get an alcohol license, making lives end
Im tryin to see him, into and end over end, out of control spin
Carried off by the wind, and never seen again, for his sweet sin
His inorganic flow, wont grow, Mechanics cant stop this titanic
From being sunk, speak in monk eubonics, hes shook like gin an tonic
Sick like pneumonic, no speech when inhaling like hydrophonic chronic
In retrospective, the objectives, to leave you infected, and dissected
One rapper to subtract, keep tryin like cleaning out your intestinal tract
He spits no fire, wears bathroom attire, whos hotter, thanks for the water
Theyll only remember you past thirty, cause you fucked up like testeverde
Dont be presumptious, thisll make ya lungs bust, or spontaniously combust,
Set up the burial, I done made his vanarial area bleed, like malarial disease
Im goning to fly out like a trapeze, while you pick from the nominees

.................ok............. uppin dis SHIT.....

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16 KOs 19 WINS

yo ill vote on this if u drop a vote on my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255

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alright

bigppappa: good personals..good punches
but you need to work on your structure
your opener and closer was hittin hard
your flow was wack though
i seen a couple multi's and good meta's


qgsmasher: u had a good flow and structure
but you lacked good punches n multi's
i saw some meta's but this wasnt that good

vote:bigpappa

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bigPappa use his name in his verse like nine times and it was reffering to yourself,but I liked that QBsmasher line with moss and all that. Also you need more punches. QBsmasher you was killin the vocab and was makin sense too. I liked some of your punches very original. BigPappa had more personals than you.
Overall I was feelin QBsmasher's flow it was more on point,
vote=QBsmasher

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HITS

DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

i love it... always happens... fuckin newbs votin for newbs..... uppin..

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16 KOs 19 WINS

Uppin for votes....

damn I need ya'll mafuckas to hurry up and close this battle out 4 me.....Its 3-0 me so far here is the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586

you vote on mine I vote on your scouts honor!!!!!! Lol

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Verbal Violence 5-0 KO
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/crisisus2music.htm If you feel the need to Know where my Lyrical talent is check the link above
East Miles

East Miles I done voted on that shit, besides you aint allowed to post links to your shit unless you vote on someone elses first. Lets get some real POSTS in here with votes.

Uppin for votes...

qb smasher wins it easy,.................................

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